User talk:Colosk8brdr

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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 22:53, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Hello

Just wanted to let you know, I went through your "Your Brother's Girlfriend" story and did some corrections for you, but I think you may want to think about your grammar more. Also, I left you a couple notes on Talk:Go To Sleep and Talk:Wait it out. These are my opinions only, and I do realize it is your story, not mine, and if I don't like it, I can just not read it. However, I did want to let you know my point of view on these two pages, just to give you something to think about as you write something for others to read on here. I guess you can take my opinions or leave them, up to you. --Dirty Me 06:14, 3 April 2014 (UTC)