User talk:Mezzo
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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. --Platypus 12:06, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
Haven't I been doing that so far already? I am still kind of new to all this... Ive made my newest project into a category and have been including the category thing on every page since... Thanks. --Mezzo 12:14, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
You're categorizing some stories and leaving other stories uncategorized. You need to place a category on EVERY page you post. I'm addig the category to Endless Lust, but in the future, uncategorized stories will be deleted. --Platypus 14:18, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
Oh I see... sorry about that, I'll try to remember to do that from now on... I'm going to go and delete some of my earlier stories soon anyway --Mezzo 09:48, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Just thought I'd see what you got
I've been flipping through the 'recent changes' page every now and again, and I've been noticing that you're username has been popping up every time I checked. So I decided hey, let's check this guy out and see what he has to offer. It seems to me that you have a lot of projects going on. I didn't check all of them, but most of the ones that 'I' chose only were one page stories (you can prove me wrong here if you want). It's nice that you're writing these stories, but I suggest that you should keep focus on having only two or three projects going on at the same time, and even that is a bit high.
I don't often read through adult stories either, as I find sex in stories uninteresting, but I decided to just have a look at your 'Diary' series' anyway to see how they were. I really enjoyed how you structured the entries in, I've never seen anything like it. One thing I would suggest you do is to put a back button link to the previous page, I know it may sound stupid as there is a back button in every web browser, but trust me, it makes the overall story feel more polished and easier to use.
One last thing It swayed left and right as it stood there throbbing in full glory, 18 inchs of meat.. 18 INCHES!!! Maybe you should just shorten it down to at least only 13 inches, waaaaaaaay to unrealistic. But good job on your stories! Keep up the good work, and I hope that one day I get to review one of those stories one day.
Time Stopper
Noticed the title "Time Stopper" in the recent changes and gave the pages written so far to "Time Stopper" a quick look. It interests me, mainly because it's something we've all wondered about, and it comes with an interesting protagonist... one that breeds violence. Violence that I'd love to be a part of the creation... of. I guess that what I'm proposing is this: Would you care if I wrote a few pages for Time Stopper? Feel free to turn me down on this, I won't mind. If you're curious as to what the writing would be like, feel free to check out my story that basically contains nothing but gore, Megan. --TheElderOnes 17:38, 9 October 2011 (UTC)
All right, I'll see what I can do for the city. I'll do what I can to keep the actions low-profile, keep the character clever - cause things that could otherwise be considered "accidents", correct? - and keep the focus on small, orchestrated incidents instead of a massive whirlwind of chaos.
Before I start touching anything in the city, though, I want to know if you had any ideas already planned out for anything in there. I'll incorporate them into the pages I could write, y'know? Oh, and if you want a little clean-up done on any pages at any time, feel free to tell me and I'll get to it.
Well then, I'll certainly entertain myself with writing bits of Time Stopper in-between my own projects like The Diary and WLB. Let's see if we can't get this to be a featured story. --TheElderOnes 14:41, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
