User talk:Blackdragon25

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Revision as of 14:16, 25 May 2011 by Platypus (Talk | contribs)

Please review what you're posting as your spelling and grammar is very poor. For example:

she is taken of gaurd and your mouth agasint

should be: she is taken off guard and your mouth against

--Platypus 18:29, 18 May 2011 (UTC)

Windows have shutters. Human beings shiver and shudder. --Platypus 14:23, 19 May 2011 (UTC)

When ever is one word. Whenever. Girlfreind is correctly spelled girlfriend. Try to use proper spelling and grammar! --Platypus 14:16, 25 May 2011 (UTC)

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