User talk:Incubus

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Hey Incubus just wanted to say I've really liked your story "Fantasy Creatures" especially the Orc Bandit path. Frankly I'd basically abandoned coming here till I saw your story on a whim, so I hope you are still interested in continuing it, if not here than on another site maybe. -Spiritwind

Yeah, I still come around to read things from time to time though I mostly check out chyoa than this site. I'll be honest a lot of my enjoyment has been superficial I always liked erotica set in a Fantasy or medieval setting and your story has some kinks I enjoy, but also you seem to have put some effort into this and many of the paths have a robust amount of content, it also seems like you enjoy it. And Id say the biggest improvement is probably simple things like spelling grammar and word choice (not that yours is super bad or anything by any means but its something that always can use work :D) - Spiritwind

Aww I'm really sorry to hear you are quitting Fantasy Creatures, I for my part have really enjoyed what you wrote, read some stuff I dont see very often and loved it. Anyway I do wish you success in whatever future endeavors you plan. Good Luck <3 -Spiritwind