Cecilia/Church

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Cecilia decides to go to the local Church. Maybe there she can forget about her flaws and feel beautiful.
Cecilia decides to go to the local Church. Maybe there she can forget about her flaws and feel beautiful.
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She enters a large Catholic church building. There is not a mass going on right now, but there is an old man kneeling in he pew, praying, and there is a young catholic girl your age sitting alone on the last row. Visitors muct be welcome to come and go as they please.
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She enters a large Catholic church building. There is not a mass going on right now, but there is an old man kneeling in the front pew, praying, and there is a young Catholic girl about Cecilia's age sitting alone in the last row. Visitors must be welcome to come and go as they please.
What does Cecilia do?
What does Cecilia do?

Current revision as of 23:11, 13 November 2012

Cecilia decides to go to the local Church. Maybe there she can forget about her flaws and feel beautiful.

She enters a large Catholic church building. There is not a mass going on right now, but there is an old man kneeling in the front pew, praying, and there is a young Catholic girl about Cecilia's age sitting alone in the last row. Visitors must be welcome to come and go as they please.

What does Cecilia do?

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