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'''My Roommates: Freshman Year''' [[Category: My Roommates: Freshman Year]]
'''My Roommates: Freshman Year''' [[Category: My Roommates: Freshman Year]]
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You decide to go with Ashley, you can't go wrong with another cheerleader! Plus she would be just across the hall if you had any questions. Ashley gives you a small smile then shows you the room you will be staying in. You then proceed to move in your stuff while Ashley finished fixing up her room the way she wants it.
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You decide to go with Ashley. You can't go wrong with another cheerleader! Plus she will be just across the hall if you have any questions. Ashley gives you a small smile then shows you the room you will be staying in. You then proceed to move in your stuff while Ashley finishes fixing up her room the way she wants it.
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When your done you walk over and peer into her room. Ashley is sitting at her desk turning on her computer. She turns and gives you a small smile. "Hey, you finished moving in yet?"
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When you're done, you walk over and peer into her room. Ashley is sitting at her desk, turning on her computer. She turns and gives you a small smile. "Hey, you finished moving in yet?"
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"Yup!" You respond happy to be done with it. "So, you on the cheerleading squad as well?"
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"Yup!" you respond happy to be done with it. "So, you on the cheerleading squad as well?"
Ashley gives you a full smile finally and nods. "Yep! I've been on it for a year now and it's great! Do you plan on trying out?"
Ashley gives you a full smile finally and nods. "Yep! I've been on it for a year now and it's great! Do you plan on trying out?"
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"Nah." You say with a sly grin. "I'm already accepted. Looks like i'll be seeing you a lot from now on! I have the new uniform ready to open in my room."
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"Nah," you say with a sly grin. "I'm already accepted. Looks like I'll be seeing you a lot from now on! I have the new uniform ready to open in my room."
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Spinning in her chair to fully face you Ashley's eyes light up in excitement. "Oh really!? Thats great! You should so bring it in here and try it on for me. I bet you'll look great in it!"
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Ashley spins in her chair to fully face you, her eyes lit up in excitement. "Oh really! That's great! You should so bring it in here and try it on for me. I bet you'll look great in it!"

Current revision as of 13:53, 2 September 2010

My Roommates: Freshman Year

You decide to go with Ashley. You can't go wrong with another cheerleader! Plus she will be just across the hall if you have any questions. Ashley gives you a small smile then shows you the room you will be staying in. You then proceed to move in your stuff while Ashley finishes fixing up her room the way she wants it.

When you're done, you walk over and peer into her room. Ashley is sitting at her desk, turning on her computer. She turns and gives you a small smile. "Hey, you finished moving in yet?"

"Yup!" you respond happy to be done with it. "So, you on the cheerleading squad as well?"

Ashley gives you a full smile finally and nods. "Yep! I've been on it for a year now and it's great! Do you plan on trying out?"

"Nah," you say with a sly grin. "I'm already accepted. Looks like I'll be seeing you a lot from now on! I have the new uniform ready to open in my room."

Ashley spins in her chair to fully face you, her eyes lit up in excitement. "Oh really! That's great! You should so bring it in here and try it on for me. I bet you'll look great in it!"


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