User talk:Cadrac

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Current revision as of 13:33, 8 April 2016

Your choices were choices for the the pizza girl would respond, not choices for how you, the main character/reader would respond. Some writers are indifferent about such things, but in my stories, your choices are limited to your choices, not his, hers or whoever's choices. --Platypus 21:50, 29 December 2013 (UTC)

Okay, thank you for the clarification. I'll make sure and limit any edits to the reader's actions/reactions from now on.

I understand that you want to insure that stories don't get crossed, but given that Smutty Sex Romp doesn't contain complex titles structures, I don't want to start adding such things now. If I was starting the story today, I would write it that way, but when I started, SSR was one of about 12 stories on the site and story crossings wasn't much of a concern. Using proper names in choices rather than pronouns usually suffices to prevent story crossings.

Also, plural nouns don't use apostrophes. Pizza's means belonging to the pizza, such as the pizza's toppings. The plural of pizza is pizzas. --Platypus 22:36, 29 December 2013 (UTC)

No problem. Your story, your decision. If I come across any other crossover problem, like I did with the Rihanna choice, I'll just figure out a way to reword the page title so it doesn't conflict rather than making a complex one.

Ah. Sorry for the mistake. I didn't know that that was how Heather Madison was supposed to be written and your personal experience beats my fuzzy memory of a Scrubs episode though I'm actually curious about Saint Brigid's Children Hospital (is that a real place or made up) or how she's apparently blase about fondled by patients. Doesn't that constitute sexual harassment? (Not for the 10 year old that's been in a accident. I mean the other patients. She did mention that "Jimmy" was not the first but the youngest patient to touch her like that.) --User:Fredhot16 17:35, 10 March 2016

Also, do you mind the "You just might have stolen this boy's life" line? --User:Fredhot16 12:55, 11 March 2016

Alright, I've removed the above line. --User:Fredhot16 08:33, 8 April 2016