Call the cops(16 IE/WM)

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You crouch down quickly and fumble for the cellphone in your purse, you've just pulled it out and hit the nine button when it's pulled out of your hand, you look to see the black thug holding it.
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You crouch down quickly and fumble for the cellphone in your purse. You've just pulled it out and hit the nine button when it's pulled out of your hand. You look to see the black thug holding it.
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"What do we have here an undercover cop?. Or a snitch?."
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"What do we have here, an undercover cop? Or a snitch?"
What are you going to tell him?:
What are you going to tell him?:

Revision as of 10:17, 13 March 2014

You crouch down quickly and fumble for the cellphone in your purse. You've just pulled it out and hit the nine button when it's pulled out of your hand. You look to see the black thug holding it.

"What do we have here, an undercover cop? Or a snitch?"

What are you going to tell him?:

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