Adventure!!!

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"Guess I'd better get some sleep..." you say.
"Guess I'd better get some sleep..." you say.
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As you get up, your chair creeks LOUDly and the other only living thing in your train cabin (besides the spider) is a Girl, Mary. She hears she creek and starts to wake up.
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As you get up, your chair creeks LOUDly and the other only living thing in your train cabin (besides the spider) is a Girl, Alice. She hears she creek and starts to wake up.
"What?huh....?where...? Did you wake me up?" She says staring at you, waiting for an anser.
"What?huh....?where...? Did you wake me up?" She says staring at you, waiting for an anser.
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" Sorry." you say but you are cut off by
" Sorry." you say but you are cut off by
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    A HUGE EXPLOSION FROM THE CARRIDGE NEXT TO YOU!
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::A HUGE EXPLOSION FROM THE CARRIDGE NEXT TO YOU!
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"AHH!!WHAT WAS THAT!" Alice screams.
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[[leave the cabin.]]
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[[ stay in the cabin ]]
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[[Category:Adventure!!!]]

Current revision as of 13:36, 12 February 2010

This isn't your first train ride, but yet something feels weird and awsome, at the same time, about this trip.But what?

You take a glance at the train's clock nailed above the window. 3:00AM.

"Guess I'd better get some sleep..." you say.

As you get up, your chair creeks LOUDly and the other only living thing in your train cabin (besides the spider) is a Girl, Alice. She hears she creek and starts to wake up.

"What?huh....?where...? Did you wake me up?" She says staring at you, waiting for an anser.

" Sorry." you say but you are cut off by

A HUGE EXPLOSION FROM THE CARRIDGE NEXT TO YOU!

"AHH!!WHAT WAS THAT!" Alice screams.

leave the cabin.

stay in the cabin

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