Walk towards your family

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You sit down in the front of the hall with your family. A solemn look in your parents faces.
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Moving towards your family, you sit just as the mass was about to begin. It was dreadfully serious with ashen looking faces on the crowd.
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The Priest began "We are here to mourn the passing of Jacob......." You ignore the rest as you continue to stare at the coffin.
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Looking around there were children your age here. A tap on your shoulders and you notice your family moving outside towards the hall.
 
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Your father turns and looks at you. "You two will follow Mikael here he'll take you to your room. Go rest for now we still have something to take care of." Your parents turning back and headed towards the crowd of adults.
 
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You look at the man who drove you to the mansion his name was Mikael. "Come ill show you to your rooms." he said with a raspy muffled voice.
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(After the Funeral)
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You start walking his strides to big with his long legs.
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Your father talks to you. "You two will follow Ian. We'll meet you for breakfast downstairs tomorrow. We still have some business to take care of."
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You were in another hall left, and another left up the stairs.  
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He turned and left both your parents talking with the other adults. Ian was the driver who drove you here. He motioned you over and you and your sister followed him into the manor.
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The colors of the halls different some with carpets with gold trimmings decorated in eggshell colored walls.  
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Then some imposing yet beautiful with grey stone halls with barely any sunlight filtering in from the scarce windows.  
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The noise from the entrance was growing faint and the steps of your feet on stone was now echoing the halls. Sometimes you'd pass by another person but as you go deeper inwards you hardly see another soul. Grey hallways of stone and tapestry turned into open rooms decorated to be cozy and others elegant beyond compare with carpets and artworks lying on the wall. The manor sure is an odd mixture, quite like a fun house.
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All the lights were on giving a welcoming feeling.  
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You get to the third floor and you reach a cozy hallway.
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"This is your room" he points to your sister. "You'll have another guest to keep you company and breakfast is at 7 downstairs in the patio."
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Your sibling opens the door and enters. A limpse inside reveals another girl and then the door shuts.
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Finally after walking or more like a marathon trying to catch up to Mikael you come to a stop.
 
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"This is your room" he points to your sister. You'll share a room with another guest then looking inside a younger girl was sitting on the bed. Staring back interested at the new arrivals. 
 
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Mikael taps your shoulders and your off again to you guess your own room.
 
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After a few seconds down the hall were your sister was he points towards the door.
 
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"This is your room. Breakfast is at 8AM in the dining room on the 1st floor." Then he walks away.
 
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Pushing the door you stop. Inside your room you had 2 other boys. Their conversation stopped and they turn towards you.
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A few rooms down the same hallway was your room. Ian said the same speech and walked away. You enter the room.
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Like your sister you had roommates a blond haired boy and a red haired freckled one stared at you.
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The first one with red hair spoke "Come in. So i guess your our third?"
 
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You looked puzzled and stepped inside and notice 3 beds then you realized "Yah"
 
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Again they started talking amongst themselves as you sat on your bed. you ask yourself what am I doing here......
 
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Suddenly you hear their conversation stop. The blond one spoke up "No"  
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You spoke first "Someone told me I was sleeping here?" The other boys looked at each other before welcoming you into the room.
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Then the red haired boy said "Might as well the more people the better."
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It was a large room easily able to fit 3 beds on one side. A working fireplace with a balcony view it was a lavish room.
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You head towards the empty bed and began to unpack your belongings. The other 2 looked like they were getting ready to go.
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He calls you outwanna come with us and explore this place?
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The boy with the red hair spoke, "Hey were gonna go look around you want to come?"
(((((The story diverges from now on so please choose your own adventure)))))
(((((The story diverges from now on so please choose your own adventure)))))

Current revision as of 11:20, 21 October 2011

Moving towards your family, you sit just as the mass was about to begin. It was dreadfully serious with ashen looking faces on the crowd. The Priest began "We are here to mourn the passing of Jacob......." You ignore the rest as you continue to stare at the coffin.


(After the Funeral)

Your father talks to you. "You two will follow Ian. We'll meet you for breakfast downstairs tomorrow. We still have some business to take care of." He turned and left both your parents talking with the other adults. Ian was the driver who drove you here. He motioned you over and you and your sister followed him into the manor.

The noise from the entrance was growing faint and the steps of your feet on stone was now echoing the halls. Sometimes you'd pass by another person but as you go deeper inwards you hardly see another soul. Grey hallways of stone and tapestry turned into open rooms decorated to be cozy and others elegant beyond compare with carpets and artworks lying on the wall. The manor sure is an odd mixture, quite like a fun house.

You get to the third floor and you reach a cozy hallway. "This is your room" he points to your sister. "You'll have another guest to keep you company and breakfast is at 7 downstairs in the patio." Your sibling opens the door and enters. A limpse inside reveals another girl and then the door shuts.


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A few rooms down the same hallway was your room. Ian said the same speech and walked away. You enter the room. Like your sister you had roommates a blond haired boy and a red haired freckled one stared at you.


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You spoke first "Someone told me I was sleeping here?" The other boys looked at each other before welcoming you into the room.

It was a large room easily able to fit 3 beds on one side. A working fireplace with a balcony view it was a lavish room. You head towards the empty bed and began to unpack your belongings. The other 2 looked like they were getting ready to go.

The boy with the red hair spoke, "Hey were gonna go look around you want to come?"

(((((The story diverges from now on so please choose your own adventure)))))

Go with them

Stay and go to sleep

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