Afraid of the Dark

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The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as the highway as the road continued down deeper in the forest.  
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The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as it continued into forest.  
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The cars were passing by one.... two... a truck then a van... You sit silently looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.
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The cars were passing by one.... then a second... a truck then a van...  
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Here you are traveling with your sister to a relatives house excused from the academy for a week.
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You sit looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.
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It was nice being excused from school but for what? And where were you going...  
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Traveling with your sister, and excused for a week from the academy.
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It was relaxing being away from school but where were you going...
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The car slowed down then parked itself by the side of the road. You look at the driver as he gets out and crosses the now empty lane of road.
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You shake your sister "Where's he going??" The same puzzled look on her face as yours.
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The road was bordered by the forest on both sides. You stare at driver as he heads to a wooden post like toll moving it open.
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The car slowed down, and you look in front there was still the highway and then around and realize you stopped at side of the road on a deeply wooded part trees tall on both sides of the road. The driver suddenly getting out crossing the street towards an old wooden gate barring a dusty road into the forest.
 
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It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road pulling off your headphones you realize your sister was still busy talking to someone on the phone.  
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It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road into the forest. Your sister seemed unnerved by the whole situation she was back looking at her phone.
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While your driver was listening to a classical music on the radio.
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You take of your mp3 player wondering where your going the driver changing the station on the radio till finally he hit a frequency with a classical song.
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Revision as of 07:56, 15 January 2010

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The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as it continued into forest.

(15 mins ago) The cars were passing by one.... then a second... a truck then a van... You sit looking outside while listening to your mp3 player. Traveling with your sister, and excused for a week from the academy. It was relaxing being away from school but where were you going...

The car slowed down then parked itself by the side of the road. You look at the driver as he gets out and crosses the now empty lane of road. You shake your sister "Where's he going??" The same puzzled look on her face as yours.

The road was bordered by the forest on both sides. You stare at driver as he heads to a wooden post like toll moving it open.


(Back to the present) It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road into the forest. Your sister seemed unnerved by the whole situation she was back looking at her phone. You take of your mp3 player wondering where your going the driver changing the station on the radio till finally he hit a frequency with a classical song.

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