User talk:Jealco

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Revision as of 19:53, 21 October 2015

Please review Punctuation with dialogue. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --Platypus 23:12, 17 October 2012 (UTC)

Please change the location listed in the status bar when your character changes locations. --Platypus 09:17, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Also, the choices should be choices your character can make, not choices she can't. She can choose to kick her shoes off, but she can't choose where they land unless she's aiming. --Platypus 12:20, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

I know you know how to categorize pages. You're still required to do so. So please, don't forget to include the category on the pages you're posting! --Platypus 11:56, 2 July 2014 (UTC)

Minor Edits

You edited Visit the clothing department, marking the edit as "minor".

• Checking the minor edit box signifies that the current and previous versions differ only superficially (typographical corrections, etc.), in a way that no editor would be expected to regard as disputable.
• Any edit that changes the meaning of an article is not a minor edit, even if the edit concerns a single word, and it is improper to mark such an edit as minor.

Adding a new choice ("Look for some new nightclothes") is not a minor edit. There's nothing wrong with the edit per se, but please don't mark such edits as minor. Thanks Anedwcan 17:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)

Plans for Fuc Mi Hod

What are your plans for this part of the smutty sex romp. I was thinking of contributing.

    Don't really have many at the moment.  Was just running with a vague idea of how to describe that particular outfit.  I'm game for most anything, to be fair.

Hello there Jealco, Uman from the Humiliation of Katie. Glad to see someone so enthusiastic about the story XD. I pride myself on writing with good grammar and consistency with the plot. The other authors who contribute I have also found to be mainly the same way. I would really like it if you wanted to help patch the story (I am quite busy too, weekends are when I can do writing for the most part and I have been busy even on weekends as of late.)

So in answer to your questions.

1.) I'll take care of the mysterious bra of legend. Thanks for pointing that out, some things are missed when I crank out chapters.

2.) Yeah if you could perhaps go through and fix up chapters with the bad ages that would be great. Even if you only do one or so every couple days they should all be fixed up rather quickly. I am mainly concerned with her age 16 stuff, but I guess the age 13 stuff needs to be fixed too. I think we could just ret-con everything to being age 18 from those plot lines.

3.) I'll would really like to see your ideas for really any part of HoK (or any other story of mine for that matter.) I am willing to add onto people's ideas, I usually run off of the rule that I add one chapter for every one I see go up. Sometimes that doesn't happen, but I've had long enough of a break that I think I can get back into it for a while again. Part of the problem is that I am writing sci-fi novels on side, this more "erotic" work is really just practice for my serious stuff. I generally try to get all the ridiculousness, comedy, and sex out here.

- Hope to see what you got to add, Uman on October 21st, 2015