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Uncle: No problem Kamir , you can always count on me  
Uncle: No problem Kamir , you can always count on me  
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Kamiru: (Suddenly i heared lot of screams) , What the hell?  
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Kamir: (Suddenly i heared lot of screams) , What the hell?  
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Out of nowhere a big flame has appeared and put my dad into ashes)
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(Out of nowhere a big flame has appeared and put my dad into ashes)
   
   
(I tried running there but my uncle has stopped me and we started escaping with my mother when she tripped over and it was too late)
(I tried running there but my uncle has stopped me and we started escaping with my mother when she tripped over and it was too late)
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(Out of nowhere a tree has crushed my leg when falling down , i couldn't do much after that)
(Out of nowhere a tree has crushed my leg when falling down , i couldn't do much after that)
   
   
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(I closed my opens for a sec or two and opened them and saw wind carrying me to a cave where i was safe)
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(I closed my eyes for a sec or two and opened them and saw wind carrying me to a cave where i was safe)
   
   
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(I asked who they are but they never answered, at least i think not they might just speak in another language...)
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(I asked who they are but they never answered, at least i think not , they might just speak in another language...)
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(I hear some peaceful music and i fallen asleep)
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(I hear some peaceful music and i fall asleep)
   
   
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(when I woke up I saw white ghost's flying all around the place about 6 and talking, now I could understand them for some reason)
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(when I woke up I saw 6 white ghost's flying and talking in the cave , now I could understand them for some reason)
   
   
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(I really don't know what had happened to me while i was asleep but i do feel really light for some reason)
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(I really don't know what had happened to me while i was asleep but i do feel really weird for some reason)
   
   
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Kamiru:(I grabbed some courage and asked) who are you and why do i feel so different?
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Kamir:(I grabbed some courage and asked) who are you and why do i feel so different?
   
   
(For no reason they thrown a big rock at me , I panicked and somehow found myself at the other side of the cave , unharmed)
(For no reason they thrown a big rock at me , I panicked and somehow found myself at the other side of the cave , unharmed)
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Kamiru: what happened to me ?  
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Kamir: what happened to me ?  
(Soon after I realized that I can move extremely fast for some reason)
(Soon after I realized that I can move extremely fast for some reason)
   
   
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(After that they told me that I have been gifted with the power of the God of The Wind and all I have to do to keep this power , is to believe in the God of Wind)
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(After that they told me that I have been gifted with the power of the God of The Wind and all I have to do to keep this power , is to believe in that God)
   
   
(I didn't have any beliefs anyway so I agreed)
(I didn't have any beliefs anyway so I agreed)
   
   
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(They disappear and i'm alone again , just with a feel of presence of wind)
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(They disappear soon after that i should feel alone but i don't , i feel some kind of presence surrounding me)
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[[I go out and hunt for some food (Hungry stomach Noises)]]
[[I go out and hunt for some food (Hungry stomach Noises)]]
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[[Category: Hunteria's Rising]]

Current revision as of 17:06, 20 February 2015

Right now i'm at the party , my birthday party.

I got gifts from the whole town , i felt like this would be my best day of my life , i got the ultimate daggers from my uncle.

Kamir: Thanks uncle

Uncle: No problem Kamir , you can always count on me

Kamir: (Suddenly i heared lot of screams) , What the hell?

(Out of nowhere a big flame has appeared and put my dad into ashes)

(I tried running there but my uncle has stopped me and we started escaping with my mother when she tripped over and it was too late)

(I never felt worse pain than now , i don't wish anyone such cruel story)

(Half way through the escape i lost sight of my uncle , i kept running as the town was in fire)

(Out of nowhere a tree has crushed my leg when falling down , i couldn't do much after that)

(I closed my eyes for a sec or two and opened them and saw wind carrying me to a cave where i was safe)

(I asked who they are but they never answered, at least i think not , they might just speak in another language...)

(I hear some peaceful music and i fall asleep)

(when I woke up I saw 6 white ghost's flying and talking in the cave , now I could understand them for some reason)

(I really don't know what had happened to me while i was asleep but i do feel really weird for some reason)

Kamir:(I grabbed some courage and asked) who are you and why do i feel so different?

(For no reason they thrown a big rock at me , I panicked and somehow found myself at the other side of the cave , unharmed)

Kamir: what happened to me ?

(Soon after I realized that I can move extremely fast for some reason)

(After that they told me that I have been gifted with the power of the God of The Wind and all I have to do to keep this power , is to believe in that God)

(I didn't have any beliefs anyway so I agreed)

(They disappear soon after that i should feel alone but i don't , i feel some kind of presence surrounding me)



I go out of the cave and go back to the town to see if someone survived

I go out and hunt for some food (Hungry stomach Noises)

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