User:Snowball

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Revision as of 13:17, 12 December 2011

I am the wri- Well, actually I picked up my first story from the Pit. I enjoy playing these stories, but it annoys me intensely when I spot an error so immmediately fix it no matter what the description says. Unless it's part of the story. I'm not very good at creating themes so I work on inactive and/or abandoned stories from the Pit or the Main Page.

And, I decided to read through every story in the up to 13yrs range(I'm not going higher) and get rid of all the spelling errors.

Sometimes, I scroll through the main page and find public stories to add to. Ever wonder why the bottom area has a sea of red and green while above is all black? And why almost everything below is Public?

Right, Long Page Challenge and Genesis are going to devour all my time for... some time. So, don't expect anything in To Court, Kill a salesman, POV or Penguins. --Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader 13:17, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

What I am Doing

I wouldn't create an account if I just played, right?

Genesis

This is important enough to get here. I'm going to make this the best so far, so my others... Left in the dust. Heyoeveryone is doing it as a side project too, so I'm going to work on it, and I think I'll add updates.

Update 1

Added the beginning to start being a God, though I kinda need a Status Indicator, and the normal one doesn't fit, what's MP going to stand for?

02:23, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

Update 2

Plot Development! Antagonist is the one most powerful, known to friends and enemies as Lucy. Harris is having REALLY bad luck on this end. Thanks to Heyoeveryone for making the status indicator.

07:44, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

Update 3

Apologize fo r the tiny update, had stuff to do all morning to afternnon. It's... one page. Harris'll go back to poking in his little god place once he finds some friends. Maybe he'll annoy all of them. Might add a path where Harris has to help. All prelimenary now. Update 4 will have MUCH more.

Long Page Challenge

Also important enough to have updates and on its own.

Try to create very long pages and still keep within Family Friendly. A story about this site.

Update 1

First Page, have to make it long enough to get on Long Pages. Setting up Maximus and Rob(Unless I have a better name for the main character, editor.)

Update 2

Added in a branch off to Frider's story. I should make that account before someone alse does. That or change the name.

Excerpt: Maximus was a CYOA Main Character's Best Friend Character. His code was CYOA-MCB-FC-0021. His description was as an eleven black-haired boy. Kind of smart but... obtuse. He let thing's slip by. These descriptions leaked into character's personal lives a lot. If anyone wanted his official Identity...

Name: Maximus

Age: 11

Personality: Intelligent but slow in interactions with other people.

Family: Widowed mother.

Description: Black-Haired, Blue Eyes.

Does odd jobs to support his mother. Symapathetic to his friend

Maximus popped out of his story to visit some friends and let Mauximus, the result of a spelling error play the story. He'd come back when someone edited it. Maximus strolled along the main page, hiding in some clever subtext and a line like this |. He hid in an option, snuck past Idea pitches and got to the content distributor. Two portals. PG-13 and FF. He knew the other two were blocked to him, an eleven grade character. If he wanted to get there, it would be on foot, and it was hard to hide in the headline of the stories. He was cheerful today. He's show someone his trick. Maximus|Kill yourself. He did it every so often. If a User saw his description walking around they'd freak out. He sometimes turned into code and blocked edits, they'd see his name where it wasn't supposed to be, and he'd get edited out. He shuddered. Tales about being edited lasted through the ages. Maximus retained his mood.

Update 3

Planning to have an epic war coming up. I have to pick up stories with things that can fight.

Plausible Chacklist:

• Zombies
• Soldiers(Of course)

That's about it. Scrollling to find more stuff.

Editing

Editing work I do when bored. Which is a lot of the time.

Humanity It's open to the public. So I'll add on to it when bored!

Madman's Mansion See 'Humanity'

|Penguins (just click "Three times a day") A story hauled from the Pit. I recently threw in Epilogues which should make it more interesting, and I hope to close off all the redlinks but one, so I can continue from there, or link everything to it.

Visiting the Zoo(Somewhat, since it didn't specify whether I could mess with it) Go play it, although it is long with TONS of redlinks. I hope I can correct that, although the most important thing to give it now would be progress,

Anything else I see that has any kind of mistake(ie:speling, simply quite...strange phrasing ,puncTuatIon ErrOrs.etc). I hate it when the errors just remain unfixed.

Creating

Creating is great! Though I might not finish them...

The Crimes which FAIL

A series of crimes that don't work out. Hoping to make just one good ending, so people can look for it.

To Court!

This is basically a series of court cases you can play, but I am not working on it right now. The two cases in progress should be interesting, in any case.

You're never getting out

A long story that should never end. I am currenntly editing the Heaven and Hell parts so that foolish decisions don't kill you.

Point Of View

Allows you to see Life, the story from a view other than man's

To Kill a Salesman

It's not mine, the idea isn't, but I grabbed it when the title was a redlink.

Other Stuff

I write stories, so choices aren't very far away. I have a few stories down, so I might publish them on, although some are really crap. One of them might be good to add choices to, but I am hoping to make a book with it...

Finished

Anything I utterly completed, like closed off all redlinks and plotholes.

Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Well, I kind of gave up near the end, hope someone expands.

Future Plans