Editing Favon

Favon is the central and most important of the states. It lies directly west of the colonies, (west of the colony of Whitesmith) and is bordered by the ocean to the north. Verington, the largest city in the Confederation lies in the northern part of Favon. Favon is the most industrialized of the states and can bring the best weapons and vehicles to bear in a conflict. Soldiers from Favon are better trained than their counterparts in the outlying states, but are not as good outdoorsmen.
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-	Favon is the central and most important of the states. It lies directly west of the colonies, (west of the colony of Whitesmith) and is bordered by the ocean to the north. Verington, the largest city in the Confederation lies in the northern part of Favon~~. All the major politcal, military and industrail institutions are located here~~.Favon is the most industrialized of the states and can bring the best weapons and vehicles to bear in a conflict. Soldiers from Favon are better trained than their counterparts in the outlying states, but are not as good outdoorsmen~~, relying on their superior weaponry to win fights~~.	+	Favon is the central and most important of the states. It lies directly west of the colonies, (west of the colony of Whitesmith) and is bordered by the ocean to the north. Verington, the largest city in the Confederation lies in the northern part of Favon. Favon is the most industrialized of the states and can bring the best weapons and vehicles to bear in a conflict. Soldiers from Favon are better trained than their counterparts in the outlying states, but are not as good outdoorsmen.