La Révolution

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Once Ch. 19 is completed, Ch. 21-25 will be open.
==Characters==
==Characters==

Revision as of 20:45, 28 June 2007

Interestingly enough, inu decided to give the fanfic a second chance, except this time around, the AD regulars would write the continuations of the story. This happened since inu just didn't have the time to continue the story and the AD regulars wanted it their way... though they weren't even in Burger King...


Contents

The Thread

Here's the thread, yo.


The Plot

The story takes place in Actonia in the capital city of Orly. The main character is named Lucille Compton (although you wouldn't know it from the last several chapters). There's a revolution goin on and stuff.

La Révolution centers around the lives of the citizens governed by a tyranical Head Governor named Michelle Ozzal and the revolution that is planned to bring justice back to all of Actonia and liberate it from Ozzal's control.


Chapters /w Summaries

  • Chapter 1 by inuyashafan213 - While reading through a newspaper, Lucille "Cille" Compton notices a headline about a death-sentenced traitor from the infamous terrorist group, the Blacken Syndicate, named for its leader, Landon Blaken. The article offers no specific information on who the traitor, only that it is in fact a "he," driving Cille to worry when she suspects that the traitor is Landon, who is incidentally her former love interest. Her longtime friend, Eric Ominae, pays her a visit and attempts to settle her conscience. He departs only before Cille is informed that her adopted son, Raef, has been kidnapped.
  • Chapter 2 by mgangel1124 - Hikki, a French baker in Luna's cafe, hears that Raef has been kidnapped. As one of the leaders of the new Syndicate, he calls a meeting to order. While most of the members drink, Hikki, who is French; Spice, who had her Spam factory shut down by Ozzal; Gottel, who had his ass mutilated during a previous riot; Angel, who's father was killed by her ex-boyfriend Matrix, who now works for Ozzal; and Captain Yemman, original Syndicate member who lost his mind after being tortured by Ozzal for information; plan their strategy of attack for rescuing Raef and the imprisoned would-be assassin. It involves cake and strippers.
  • Chapter 3 by HeeroYuy135 - Heero and Riza, a freelance sniper team from Babblstan, arrive at Trunk's Pub for a quick drink of water. As Riza takes off to use the bathroom upstairs, Hikki finds out that the two are married and takes an opporunity to seduce Heero despite that fact, which results in Riza overracting by pulling a gun on him. Hikki later learns that they are freelancer snipers, and offers them a job in the Syndicate, which the duo accepts because all three of them share the same goal in taking down Ozzal.
  • Chapter 4 by FurionTassadar - A mysterious scarred man (Goda!) discusses the recent capture of Landon and Raef with Major Tom Taredan. Meanwhile, another branch of the Syndicate (consisting of Father John Sadar, Kirara Amour, Wyatt Matthews, and Elizabeth Saurie St. Guardsman) meets at the Gunsmoke Inc. bar to discuss the plan to rescue Landon and Raef. They choose to help out by rescuing Raef while Hikki's team, from the Trunk's Pub, goes after Landon.
  • Chapter 5 by Kohikki - The plan to rescue the captives at Comdot estate is finally put in motion. Everything seems to be running smoothly until Emiri, a rather violent and possibly psychotic woman working under Ozzal confronts the members of the syndicate during their raid. The members of Father Sader's branch of the syndicate show up and free Raef, and it's discovered that Landon wasn't really captured in Comdot at all and it's likely that idea of him being the captive was only set up as an elaborate trap. Meanwhile, Emiri encounters Father Sader in the stairway where she learns that he may be more of a match for her than she had thought, making her incredibly interested in him.
  • Chapter 6 by pierrot-le-fou - Keith Douglas goes about some of his daily routines as he and his partner, Allen Black, investigate the break in at Comdot Estate. Keith later meets up with Wyatt Matthews, who was an old informant for the national police. Wyatt has recently joined back up with the syndicate and informs Keith of everything that happened the previous night.
  • Chapter 7 by matrixman124 - Titled "Enter Ozzal," this chapter introduces the main antagonist of the story, Head Governor Michelle Ozzal. General Bernice Zoltron, the overseer of the war with Rantonia, discusses the current war plans with Ozzal. Meanwhile, the infamous, perverted Professor M. Matrix is finally introduced, along with his lab assistants, Larry Zorin and Amy. Larry thinks to himself about his misfortune. Suddenly, an explosion rocks Comdot Estate. Ozzal finds out that Matrix and his sidekicks are responsible. She scolds them. Tom Taredan enters as Ozzal tries acting sinister in order to inform her that her Hot Pockets are ready.
  • Chapter 8 by mgangel1124 - After successfully rescuing Raef, the Syndicate members celebrate in Trunks' Pub when Hikki sees that Angel and the big stripper cake are missing. Angel has gone to Comdot to take revenge on Matrix. They talk, and Angel ends up being Matrix's personal stripper. Eventually, she cuts off his dick and takes back her father's book of inventions to fulfill her vengeance.
  • Chapter 9 by HeeroYuy135 - Heero talks to Hikki about being part of the Syndicate as a member, which Hikki agrees and brings them on board. Then Heero and Riza go to the St. Maria's Cathedral to confess their sins. Priestess Nafah meets up with them inside the church and hears them out. Meanwhile, Lieutenant Charles Crème, one of Ozzal's assassins, gets a lead on Hikki's Syndicate group and decides to raid Trunk's Pub with a commando team to eliminate the Syndicate group and take Hikki into custody. They are met by Heero, Riza, and Trunks as a heated firefight occurs within the pub. Afterwards, Crème, Heero, Riza, and Trunks get involved in a Mexican Standoff, which results in Heero taking the first shot, Crème shooting at Heero, and the other two killing Crème. 21 soldiers, including Crème, die in the raid, and Heero is badly injured taking bullets in the shoulder, leg, and chest, but nowhere near any vital spots.
  • Chapter 11 by inuyashafan213 - Father Sadar and Samson are sent on a quiet mission by Hikki to gather information about the Blacken Syndicate from inside the Comdot Estate archives, in hopes of learning something useful against Ozzal and also seeing what the government has discovered about the Syndicate's activities and members. While analyzing reports on the ambush of Trunks' pub, Samson and Sadar discover that a mole was responsible for revealing the location of the Syndicate's headquarters. After reading the report on Heero's murder, they also learn that his killing was actually ordered by Ozzal. Samson's curiosity also leads him to check another file which he thinks is suspicious, uncovering a secret government operation involving homicidal athlete Jake Thompson and an assassination attempt against the President of Comedia. Sadar and Samson are interrupted when Jake himself appears and tries to kill them. They escape, but only to run into Emiri, and soon after Jake catches up. Samson is captured by Emiri, while Sadar escapes, bloody and battered, to St. Maria's Cathedral. Jake and Emiri follow him to the cathedral and attempt to finish him, but their attempt is foiled when Sister Leah Nafah arrives to defend Sadar and demonstrates unique and powerful spiritual abilities on the minions of Ozzal. After Jake and Emiri are chased away, Leah helps Sadar, who faints after stating his promise to return to the Estate and rescue Samson.

Upcoming Chapters

This section displays upcoming chapters, as well as the author of the chapter.

  • Ch. 12 - Cille
  • Ch. 13 - pierrot-le-fou
  • Ch. 14 - SportsMaster
  • Ch. 15 - Lazy17
  • Ch. 16 - FurionTassadar
  • Ch. 17 - Kohikki
  • Ch. 18 - myname
  • Ch. 19 - HeeroYuy135
  • Ch. 20 - PokeNirvash

Once Ch. 19 is completed, Ch. 21-25 will be open.

Characters

Board Members

  • Lucille Compton = Cille - Adoptive mother of Raef, close friends with Luna. Engaged to Landon prior to his leaving.
  • Eric Ominae = OMNI-Enforcer - Childhood friend of Lucille. He owned a weapons store in Orly, which was the capital of Actonia and incidentally the only dominantly upper-class city in the whole country. He was also a naval officer who retired after several long years of dedicated and diligent service.
  • Landon Blaken = Blah_canbespanish - Fiancé of Lucille whose family was killed by the military while protesting unfair laws. Left Orly after vowing to kill Ozzal and liberate the country.
  • Luna Monegossde = MoonGoddess17 - Owner of Café de Lune. Immigrated from Comedia, close friends with Lucille.
  • Raef Compton = Maenos - Adopted son of Lucille, has been kidnapped and since been rescued. Is smitten with a girl in Comdot.
  • Major Tom Taredan = Metatronda - Chief of Security at Comdot Estate.
  • Hikki = Kohikki - Pastry Chef at Café de Lune, Leader of the revolution planning group. Is very French and apparently likes to flirt with people he finds attractive no matter the situation. Tends to make reckless decisions when it comes to overseeing operations.
  • Trunks = Trunks378 - Bartender and owner of Trunks' Pub and Dance Dance Revolution Hut. Holds the title of DDR master.
  • Spice = spiceweasel228 - Member of the revolutionary group. Wants to get back at Ozzal for closing down her spam factory.
  • Gottel = lgott23 - Another resistance member, who is still bitter about having his ass mutilated by Ozzal's guards during a riot a couple years ago.
  • Angel = mgangel1124 - Relatively new to the revolutionary group. her father was killed by Matrix who left her to go work for Ozzal and stole her father's blueprints and modified them to suit his perverted ideas. Got her revenge by cutting off Matrix's pecker.Had a brief censored sex scene with Heero's wife Riza, that was entirely crucial to the plot of the story and needs to be revisited in a later chapter and described with graphic detail.
  • Captain Yemman = myname - one of the original members of the Blacken Syndicate before they were sold out by one of its members. He was caught and tortured for information, and lost his mind in the process. Now he believes himself to be a pirate captain from the country of Yemen.
  • Dino = Odin - An informant hiding in among Ozzal's security team.
  • Professor M. Matrix = matrixman124 - Left Angel to work for Ozzal, killed her father and stole his blueprints to suit his perverted ideas. Is the top scientist of Ozzal. Took part in the creation of the trolls. Has two lab assistants. May be criminally insane. He WAS a eunuch as of chapter 8. In chapter 10, he "reconstructed" his ding dong. It is now a laser shooting cyber-dick.
  • Heero = HeeroYuy135 - a freelance sniper. Married to Riza Hawkeye for about 5 years. Heero is the main sniper while Riza is the spotter, but both positions are rotated. Both hired by the revolution planning group (by Hikki personally) to be a scouting team. Eventually decides to join Hikki's Syndicate group. Heero carries around a scoped Karabiner 98 (Kar98k for short) in a case that both of them use, and both of them carry twin Colt M1911 pistols. Is brutally eviscerated by Emeril. His guts and limbs are used to spell out Emiri's catchphrase: "Who the hell do you think I am?"
  • Big Z = Zenigundam - The head troll.
  • Father John Sadar = FurionTassadar - Syndicate member, Apparently good at planning. Walks with a limp. Has had a mixed past. May be more than he appears. Is a former thief. Has infiltrated Comdot Estate to discover Ozzal's intel on the Syndicate. Fights Jake Thompson and Emiri with Samson. May have a relationship with Priestess Nafah.
  • Kirara Amour = kiraralove = Syndicate member who has a fondness for the word Freeman (Likely a reference to Crispin Freeman, the American voice actor).
  • Wyatt Matthews = Wyotech_material - Syndicate member, Says he left the syndicate but returned due to the situation at hand. In reality, he's now a mole for the syndicate. He reports to Detective Keith Douglas.
  • Elizabeth Saurie St. Gaurdsmen - EdSpikeSesshyGirl - Syndicate member, Seemingly a somewhat reckless, agressive woman. Likes things "fast and hard".
  • Samson - MasterSamson - Hikki's assistant. He's alot more level-headed then his superior and often is irritated by the unsurmisable logic of his crazy boss. Is captured when infiltrating Comdot Estate with Sadat.
  • Emiri - Boxers - The bloodthirsty, yet oh so lovable assassin of Ozzal. She's crazeh. Especially when drunk... which is most of the time... Responsible for the murder of Heero. Aquires a somewhat disturbing fascination with Father Sadar after he wounds her during the joint Syndicate raid to free Landon and Raef.
  • Clarice - QueenoftheDorks - Member of the revolutionary group (the branch of the syndicate headed by Hikki). Thinks Hikki is unfit to be a leader, but follows him anyway.
  • Keith Douglas - k_dawg_3484 - A detective working for the National Police. Is currently investigating the confrontation between Emiri and the Syndicate. He's extremely good at his work. An extremely intelligent, often prying ladies man.
  • Allen Black - AlastourBlaque - Keith's partner and one of his closer friends. A regular at Luna's cafe, he has a daily routine of buying certain baked goods.
  • General Bernice Zoltron - SwimMod_Beezo - General heading Ozzal's campaign against Rantonia.
  • Larry Zorin - Lazy17 - The unlucky assistant of Professor Matrix. He was the top student in Action U. He was abducted soon after graduating. He really hates his life with Matrix and Amy.
  • Amy - amalgam - The lovable, yet scary OTHER assistant of Matrix. She may have ADD.
  • Priestess Leah Nafah = inuyashafan213 - The head Priestess of the St. Maria's Cathedral. Has divine powers.
  • Creme = Creme - another assassin of Ozzal. Dies in a raid to destroy Hikki's Syndicate group.
  • Goose Maverick = Top_Gun - Matrix's newest creation... His parents are fans of the Top Gun movie, hence the name. He's been genetically altered to be the ultimate spy. He likes everything for some reason. He has a tentacrotch.
  • Falchi = FalchBurns - Young girl who likes to play DDR. May be related to Amy.
  • Grant Orochi = the_great_orochi - An extremely indifferent boy who likes to play DDR. He's friends with Falchi.
  • Jake Thompson = SportsMaster - Famous baseball player turned homicidal killer. He attempted to assassinate the President of Comedia, but ended up killing off his entire team instead when they tried to stop him. He uses both a sword and a bat as his main weapons. He fights Sadar and Samson after they infiltrate Comdot Estate.

Others

  • Michelle Ozzal = Mike Lazzo - Tyrannical Head Governor of Actonia. Hates rain.
  • Manny Kimmel = Kim Manning - Mentioned by Ozzal. Could be another nation leader. May be a threat to Ozzal.

From [as] anime

  • Van Argeno = Patron at Café de Lune. Thinks Hikki is pretty. (series of origin: BLOOD+ )
  • Riza Hawkeye = Married to Heero and works as his spotter. Commits suicide after Heero's death and a brief censored sex scene with Angel, that was entirely crucial to the plot of the story and needs to be revisited in a later chapter and described with graphic detail. (series of origin: Fullmetal Alchemist)
  • Norman Burg = Member of the syndicate, guards their meeting place. (series of origin: Big O)
  • Goda = Scarred man who works for Ozzal. (series of origin: Ghost in the Shell: SAC 2nd Gig)
  • Kira Izuru = Emiri's attendant dude. He's sort of like a babysitter. He also seems to have some healing powers. (series of origin: Bleach)
  • Detective Motoko Kusanagi = Detective working in the same department as Keith. (series of origin: Ghost in the Shell: Stand Alone Complex)
  • Dorothy = Maid at Comdot Estate. (series of origin: Big O)

From other anime

  • Kamina = Friend of Keith's who ruins his chances of getting laid. (series of origin: Gurren-Lagann)

Locations

  • Actonia - A reference to the Action Discussion folder. Actonia serves as the country of the main setting so far in "La Révolution."
  • Comedia - A reference to the Comedy Discussion folder. It is the sister nation of Actonia, as well as the former home of Luna.
  • Comdot Estate - The "White House" of Actonia; the residency of the Head Governor of Actonia. Also a reference to the .com folder
  • Babblstan - Distant and obscure country with specific details still known. All that is know is that Head Governor Ozzal began a war with Babblstan 13 years ago. This is also where the freelance snipers, Heero and Riza, claim they are from. Also, it is a reference to the Babbling folder.
  • Gunsmoke Inc. - Meeting place of the seemingly smaller syndicate branch. Also, it is a reference to the Gunsmoke Inc. threads in Action Discussion.
  • Rantonia - A reference to the Rants folder. Rantonia is a nationa currently at war with Actonia. It is currently nearing defeat.
  • Land of the Rising Big Red Dot - Japan. Only a few people know where this is.


References

[as] anime

  • ray=out Magazine (series of origin: Eureka 7)
  • Karabiner 98k = The rifle Heero and Riza use is the same WWII-era rifle Charles Beams used (series of origin: Eureka 7)

Other anime

  • Four-Hands = a nickname coined by Heero and Riza for their twin-wielding abilities. Originates from the anime Black Lagoon, where the main character's nickname (Revy) is "Two-Hands."
  • Trunk's Pub shootout in Ch. 9 = another homage to Black Lagoon and the shootout in the first episode at the Yellow Flag Bar.

Modern Pop Culture

  • DDR = A game that makes people think they can dance, when they really can't... The most popular game in Trunks's pub. Is currently trashed. Trunks is waiting for an imported one to come in.
  • KOTOKO = A very famous J-POP singer. Orochi really likes him.
  • Quentin Tarantino = Director of some of the goriest, most vulgar movies in America.
  • Jean Valjean = The protagonist of Victor Hugo's Les Misèrables set during the French Revolution. Valjean is a convicted theif who escapes from prison and begins his life anew as a changed man under the alias Father Madeleine. In La Révolution, Father Sadar mentions to Samson that he is a theif escaped from prison who has started a life anew, just like Valjean.
  • The Count of Monte Cristo = Emiri is mentioned reading this book by Alexander Dumas in Chapter 10 of La Révolution and is later overheard by Samson and Sadar roleplaying a scene in the book with Kira as Edmond Dantès, Dumas' main character, and herself as Mercédès, Edmond's love interest.
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