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=Marvel Mastery=
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Hi there! Do you want more people to get into reading comic books? Well, then start with farming new talent!
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=Issue 1=
=Issue 1=
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==The Psychiatrist's Office==
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===Page 1===
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:Panel 1: The Art Style is similar to 70s Spiderman comic books. We meet our main character, a young girl with blonde hair and a yellow jacket.
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Narration: My name is Riley... I used to be normal.
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:Panel 2: Riley is seen playing hockey.
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Narration: I guess it all started in Minnesota where I was born...
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Other Narration: Really, you lived close to that Comic Reviewer on the internet?
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:Panel 3: Riley with Linkara
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Narration: Met him at a con.
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Other Narration: Aha! So you're the heroic type!
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:Panel 4: Riley is running away from wolves with two other kids a little over her age that happen to be hidden in shadow.
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Narration: I beg to differ... Juggling my normal life with my magic friends was a living nightmare. Even if I tried to help, I ended up making things worse for myself and my family!
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:Panel 5: Riley's old house with a 'FOR SALE' sign that has a 'SOLD'
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Narration: It got so bad that Dad took a high-paying job in San Francisco to get me away from them... I was eleven years old at the time.
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Other Narration: And it clearly did not go over well at all...
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:Panel 1: The Style has shifted to the style of Gaiman's Sandman series. Riley is at her new school, upset.
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Narration: You have no idea.
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:Panel 2: Riley on a Bus to Minnesota.
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Narration: I even considered running away to go back.
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Other Narration: And you clearly decided against it since we're here today.
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:Panel 3: Riley is hugging her parents in remorse.
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Narration: You don't know how close I cut it...
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:Panel 4: Riley meeting Jordan
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Narration: But with the new friends I made here in the following months, It didn't matter in the slightest... I grew to love it here!
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:Panel 5: The Ravencroft Museum of California.
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Narration: Then came the field trip to the Museum. I was Twelve Years Old at the time.
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===Page 3===
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:Panel 1: It is now in the style of Clone-Saga Era Spiderman. Riley is walking through the halls of the Museum with Jordan.
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Narration: It was a routine walk-around throughout Ravencroft's most notorious relics of history.
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:Panel 2: Riley passes by a seven-foot stone statue sitting on a throne. It is impaled with a giant weapon of some sort.
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Narration: But one of them happened to find me weak... Offered to make me strong enough to overcome hardships to come in the stories to come.
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:Panel 3: Riley's hand grasped at the handle...
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Narration: I was still struggling a little with Jordan, So I took the voice up on his offer...
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:Panel 4: ...as the statue reached for Riley's right eye!
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Narration: ...But I had to serve as his 'Vessel' in exchange.
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:Panel 5: And now, we're in the modern style. Riley is laying on the couch with a yet unseen man looming over her.
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Riley: And you know the rest of the story.
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Man: I see...
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===Page 4===
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:Panel 1: Riley is talking with the man pacing the room.
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Man: So, the statue grasped at you as it exploded into a gust of Terragen, but you were not effected in any way.
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Riley: Nope, but my family sure was...
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:Panel 2: The Man has picked up a book called 'Of Goblins and Jackals: An abusive spiritual relationship triggered by a tedious chapter in a certain spider's Career'
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Riley: Least one of them's found work as a film critic online, but the other four? It's hard to figure out whether or not we have to stock up for when any of them want to '''Taste''' something!
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Man: But you said just the other week that they don't need to eat.
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Riley: Course they don't... but sadly, that doesn't stop Citrine from helping herself to a breakfast, lunch, and dinner.
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Man: Quite.
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:Panel 3: Riley is nodding her head down in remorse.
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Riley: I mean, they're nice and all, they act to protect me in times of trouble...
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Man: Like any symbiotic entity stemming from your own life force should.
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:Panel 4: Close up on the Man's bearded face.
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Man: But still, you're still a young girl at this point and have all the time in the world to figure out what you want to do in the world.
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:Panel 5: The man glances to Riley, who has gotten off the Couch.
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Man: There's a new need for superheroes these days. You said you once wanted to be a Superhero?
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Riley: Yeah, when I was Eight... Then I kinda... grew out of it. But now that I'm like this...
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===Page 5===
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:Panel 1: The man grasps Riley's arms as he tells her something important.
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Man: Listen to me.
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:Panel 2: The man's face is silloetted as we close in on that.
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Man: Just because you haven't shown your powers yet doesn't mean you are not an Inhuman.
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:Panel 3: Riley is surprised, but still flattered
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Man: If you do start to show your powers, please do some good with such a gift. You promise?
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Riley: Sure.
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:Panel 4: Riley takes the Weapon that she pulled from the stone as she leaves.
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Man: and when you do, don't try to piggyback off the decade-old spiteful squabblers of heroics past!
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Riley: I'll keep that in mind.
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:Panel 5: We get a full body shot of her Psychologist as he waves goodbye: Dr. Judas Traveler
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Riley: Have a nice day, Dr. Traveler!
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Traveler: Thank you! I'll see you next Wednesday!
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==Taking Flight==
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:Panel 1: Riley rides her Keyblade like a flying broomstick as it soars into the sky, taking up half the page.
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:Panel 2: Riley picks up her phone and calls up home.
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Voice: So, how was the Shrink?
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Riley: You have no idea what I had to get off my chest.
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Voice: Try me.
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:Panel 3: Riley is flying through a cityscape.
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Riley: You remember when you guys were taken in and deemed inhuman?
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Voice: Yeah?
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Riley: and how your physical existence is tied symbiotically to my life force?
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:Panel 1: It reveals Citrine cooking some stir-fried rice. She is exactly who you think she is.
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Citrine: But the fact is that we're always here for you, even when it's tough.
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:Panel 2: Citrine takes a sip from her orange juice.
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Riley: So, you'd keep me safe... even when I tell him everything?
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:Panel 3: Citrine spits out her OJ
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VFX: SPIT TAKE!
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:Panel 4: Citrine screams into the phone.
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Citrine: What!?
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:Panel 1: Riley is talking with Citrine.
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==The Next Day==
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==Finding them Again==
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==Judas Traveler==
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:Panel X: Social, Drazzle, and Cornfed are standing in front of Riley.
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Social Butterfly: So just puke out the Ghostly Dragon guy out of your body so we can take it down like we do with every last one of 'em we find, m'kay?♪
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:Panel Y: A rainbow of energy flows over Riley as she stands back up again...
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Riley: You... ''ignorant harlot!''
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:Panel Z: Riley's eyes ignite with cosmic power as she roars in fancy text.
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Riley: ''''I AM THE LAST ONE!'''''
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==Leobert==
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:Panel 1: Riley's body erupts in flames which engulf the room.
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:Panel 2: a chibified Social is flailing about in panic to an equally chibified Cornfed and Drazzle's apathy and annoyance. Gothic Lolita merely shrugs.
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Social Butterfly:
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Drazzle: And this kind of fire is different, how?
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Gothic Lolita: Pthf, I've survived far worse burns than that, Just ask the Big Kahuna!*
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*Livewires #5 and #6
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:Panel 3: Social and Lol bare witness as the fire has cleared up with Riley's form replaced with that of the Stone Statue's model...
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Voice: What's the matter, scared?
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:Panel 4: ...The Dragon Lion Leobert DeMaize!
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Leobert: Or did it finally sink in as to why pickings have gotten slim nowadays?
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:Panel 1: Social points to Cornfed.
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Social Butterfly: Oh, Puh-lease! Corny here just took out one of 'em the other day!
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Cornfed: Uh... Social? I don't think bragging like that's a good id-
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:Panel 2: WHOOSH! The Dragon-Lion dashes against Cornfed, grasping him by the throat as he dashes past the panel.
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:Panel 3: CRUSH! Cornfed is slammed against the wall by Leobert with Cornfed slammed against the 'U' in the Middle
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==From the Desk of Peter Parker==
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So the Inhumans are pretty much galactic royalty, right? Always backstabbing each other to rule lesser members of their race with an iron fist? Well, I've recently divised a new classification system for Inhumans and how exposure to Terragen effects each lifeform differently.
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Class G - Dead on the spot!
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Class F - You get infected with an incredibly lethal disease that will leave you screwed over for all eternity
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Class D - Wow! Look, Nothing!
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Class C - This is where the cucoons start being a thing, Humans, Insects, Animals, even plant life can become inhuman! XD But with Class C, they end up very deformed and mutilated. They're likely to go rouge
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Class B - Non-Humans, once made inhuman, manifest average human intellect and a relatively humanoid shape from this stage onwards. This is where the superhuman skills start showing up.
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Class A - Superpowers manifest starting with this class, the forms are indistinguishable from normal man barring additional limbs. For those who refer to these kids as 'New Coke' to Mutantkind, this class onwards is what they're talking about here.
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Class S - As close to high and mighty as you can get without ending up in...
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Class X - (pronounced Class-KEY) This is where the X-men lite superheroics stop and the George R.R. Martin-type urgency starts. You are considered among the highest of cosmic royalty but you end up becoming catnip for assassins omniversewide!
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=Issue 3=
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==My Name is Yen-Sid==
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Panel 1: We see a bust shot of Yen-Sid
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Narration: My name is Yen-Sid.
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Panel 2: Eraqus and Xehanort are Arm Wrestling, Yen-Sid is reading a book and is thus far removed from the relatively minor conflict
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Narration: I've been called a resident wallflower by my peers,
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Panel 3: Full Body of Yen Sid holding his Keyblade backhand.
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Narration: But the fact of the matter is, I hold phenomenal power yet untapped.
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Panel 4: An even younger Yen Sid is floating by the pants in front of Maleficent of Light.
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Narration: My master sees it.
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Panel 5: Eraqus and Yen Sid are protecting Xehanort and Masako from a darkside heartless.
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Narration: My friends see it.
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Panel 1: Yen-Sid's shadow alludes to his future as Master Yen-Sid.
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Narration: And I've been told of a long future that might be ahead of me.
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Panel 2: Yen-Sid is walking through a Sideshow Pier, passing by...
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Narration: But here I am, hiding undercover in the average life of a normal young teenager...
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Panel 3: A young woman with messy blue hair and a navy-blue Tye-Dye shirt and bell-bottom jeans.
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Narration: But it's here that we meet one of many who are far from normal.
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Narration: My name is Scrier.
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==Page 1==
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:Panel 1: The Woodcarver has lit a candle.
:Panel 1: The Woodcarver has lit a candle.
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Woodcarver: Regardless of how these stories turn out, there's always a way for the pendulum to swing back.
Woodcarver: Regardless of how these stories turn out, there's always a way for the pendulum to swing back.
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Woodcarver: And this child is but one of those ways.
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Woodcarver: Some sought-after by choice...
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Woodcarver: A human child who wandered into one of the largest prisons humans made for monsters, if not the largest outright!
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Woodcarver: And some are found by sheer happenstance...
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Woodcarver: And in time, she had inadvertently taught monsterkind that humans aren't to be feared...
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Woodcarver: But whenever there is a big change, there will always be someone needed to push it in.
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Woodcarver: As she too learned that there was nothing to fear, but fear itself.
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==Introduction==
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So, The Archie Action Line's pretty hot stuff, am I right? So I came up with a pretty big idea that could make you a pretty big name, or at least a lot bigger than you already are. I hereby present to you a trio of new talent poached straight from the internet, each for a specific six-issue miniseries.
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First up is Kingdom Hearts re:worded, based on the hit Video Game Franchise by Square Enix. This spin-off comic focuses on the life of thirteen-year-old Riley Andersen which has been somewhat normal since an encounter with a strange monster scientist left her with her right eye meddled with and a quintet of Hard-Light Runesealed beings added to her family because of it. While her family is making progress adjusting to the change, Riley predictably isn't and it shows in her relationship with Citrine. While Citrine does love Riley very much and will do anything in her power to figure out her current condition, Riley merely pushes her away until towards the end of the miniseries but that's a bridge that will be crossed later on. Let's focus on how the Kingdom Hearts elements come into play. See, the true purpose of the comic is to explore the strong friendship of Eraqus and Xehanort alongside other characters like Yen-Sid, Masako, and newcomer Riley. The first issue deals with Eraqus and Xehanort meeting Riley while struggling with the act of smyting a Darkside Heartless until Riley pulls an ancient Keyblade from a mirror throne in her local library and then promptly runkledunked the Heartless most mercilessly. Issue two deals with the aftermath of that while the group help an expedition team make it to Atlantis, which they do! Issue Three sees the introduction of Dory, who is able to morph into a special human form in the Kingdom Hearts Universe. Issue Four which takes place in the world of Meet the Robinsons has an in-depth perspective of Riley's relationship with the Runesealed that dissects exactly who these characters are. And all throughout the comic, they chase after an enigmatic woman in a black coat and explore intergalactic space stations with built in digital universes called Dreamcasts that are controlled by an elite group of eight alien creatures known simply as the Master Players. It's in Dreamcast U-42 that the big climax of the book kicks in. After Lewis' fate changes, Eraqus, Xehanort, Riley and her Runesealed companions have to escape the Dreamcast, or face the wrath of the Master Players that govern the entire fleet.
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Like I said, Kingdom Hearts is an iconic Triple-A video game franchise up there with Zelda or Dragon Warrior. Whereas Undertale, our second miniseries, is not based on a big-budget franchise such as this. Rather, it is based on a game that one guy made in the basement of Andrew Hussie while composing the musical score for Homestuck. This focuses on Frisk's life following the pacifist run and the shenanagans that come along with it. A trio of standalone issues following the monsters dealing with Racism much like how the X-Men were designed to reflect it in america. And a subplot about Asgore Dreemurr running for president all leading up to the Big Kahuna of the second half: The Political Conquest of America by the evil Harriet Kasanov. Now, Harriet is one of those Nick Fury type of characters that cross over between comics, It will have to involve the shaking of hands in terms of the licencers, but it is very much in line with the themes I want to explore with this particular line of books. With Harriet, she represents the downward spiral of cronyist demons claiming control and corporate conformity reigning supreme. She's the type of candidate that's bad not just for the recently-freed monsters, but for our human rights as well! Frisk tries to negotiate with the President Elect as the ambassador of monsterkind, but she refuses and traps them in an alternate universe... The Same Digital Universe that lurks within Dreamcast U-42! And it's here where Frisk meets Riley and they both meet the notorious Player 01: Our stand-in for those masochistic piles of secrets who probably would play Undertale's Infamous Genocide Route because they clearly have no soul.
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Our last miniseries comes from our old buddies at Sega. To be more specific: Remember when you did a NiGHTS Comic? Yeah, you totally did a comic based on NiGHTS into Dreams way back when written by Dan Slott who went on to do the current ongoing of Spiderman! After a standalone issue featuring NiGHTS meeting Owl and re-acquainting the comic readers with the world of Nightopia. The four issues that follow are an adaptation of Journey of Dreams in the same vain as the original eight issues from the late 90s. Issue Number Five takes place a year after where thirteen-year-old Will and Helen meet sixteen-year-old Claris and Elliot and hi-jinx ensue from their kind bouncing off of one another. And of course, the Final Issue of this original miniseries sees NiGHTS fighting alongside Sonic the Hedgehog against Padloque and the Deadly Six in reference to the NoD level of Sonic Lost World.
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And what happens if these eighteen comics turn out to be successful? Well, we make Undertale an ongoing series, we do a special showcase for Kingdom Hearts' Ongoing, and NiGHTS? A bi-monthly series should be good enough. But the big thing we want to establish is a major arc that directly leads in to Kingdom Hearts III, crossing across the five Archie Action lines on the very month of KHIII's release. Issue one is a Sonic Universe Issue which sees Harriet revealed as Player 07, meaning that Player 01 has full reign over the Earth and its populace.
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Now, our first hassle is that Disney scuttled the comic rights to all of screen-based properties to Joe Comics. But remember, Disney didn't mention Kingdom Hearts in the deal. So, I think we may have a bit of a chance. Next step would be to get Square Enix's attention and ask them for their blessing since a six-issue miniseries would be a lot more time to flesh them out than a mere tutorial level.

Current revision as of 03:25, 4 October 2016

Contents

[edit] Arcs

File Z (The Past) 16, 13, 6
File A (The Act) 1, 3
File B (The Beasts) 5, 17, 8
File C (The Comrade) 7, 12, 18
File D (The Destiny) 11, 10, 15
File F (The Finale) 9, 2, 14, 4
  1. File A Part 1
  2. File F Part 2
  3. File A Part 2
  4. File F Part 4
  5. File B Part 1
  6. File Z Part 3
  7. File C Part 1
  8. File B Part 3
  9. File F Part 1
  10. File D Part 2
  11. File D Part 1
  12. File C Part 2
  13. File Z Part 2
  14. File F Part 3
  15. File D Part 3
  16. File Z Part 1
  17. File B Part 2
  18. File C Part 3

[edit] Marvel Mastery

Hi there! Do you want more people to get into reading comic books? Well, then start with farming new talent!

[edit] Issue 1

[edit] The Psychiatrist's Office

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Panel 1: The Art Style is similar to 70s Spiderman comic books. We meet our main character, a young girl with blonde hair and a yellow jacket.

Narration: My name is Riley... I used to be normal.

Panel 2: Riley is seen playing hockey.

Narration: I guess it all started in Minnesota where I was born...

Other Narration: Really, you lived close to that Comic Reviewer on the internet?

Panel 3: Riley with Linkara

Narration: Met him at a con.

Other Narration: Aha! So you're the heroic type!

Panel 4: Riley is running away from wolves with two other kids a little over her age that happen to be hidden in shadow.

Narration: I beg to differ... Juggling my normal life with my magic friends was a living nightmare. Even if I tried to help, I ended up making things worse for myself and my family!

Panel 5: Riley's old house with a 'FOR SALE' sign that has a 'SOLD'

Narration: It got so bad that Dad took a high-paying job in San Francisco to get me away from them... I was eleven years old at the time.

Other Narration: And it clearly did not go over well at all...

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Panel 1: The Style has shifted to the style of Gaiman's Sandman series. Riley is at her new school, upset.

Narration: You have no idea.

Panel 2: Riley on a Bus to Minnesota.

Narration: I even considered running away to go back.

Other Narration: And you clearly decided against it since we're here today.

Panel 3: Riley is hugging her parents in remorse.

Narration: You don't know how close I cut it...

Panel 4: Riley meeting Jordan

Narration: But with the new friends I made here in the following months, It didn't matter in the slightest... I grew to love it here!

Panel 5: The Ravencroft Museum of California.

Narration: Then came the field trip to the Museum. I was Twelve Years Old at the time.

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Panel 1: It is now in the style of Clone-Saga Era Spiderman. Riley is walking through the halls of the Museum with Jordan.

Narration: It was a routine walk-around throughout Ravencroft's most notorious relics of history.

Panel 2: Riley passes by a seven-foot stone statue sitting on a throne. It is impaled with a giant weapon of some sort.

Narration: But one of them happened to find me weak... Offered to make me strong enough to overcome hardships to come in the stories to come.

Panel 3: Riley's hand grasped at the handle...

Narration: I was still struggling a little with Jordan, So I took the voice up on his offer...

Panel 4: ...as the statue reached for Riley's right eye!

Narration: ...But I had to serve as his 'Vessel' in exchange.

Panel 5: And now, we're in the modern style. Riley is laying on the couch with a yet unseen man looming over her.

Riley: And you know the rest of the story.

Man: I see...

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Panel 1: Riley is talking with the man pacing the room.

Man: So, the statue grasped at you as it exploded into a gust of Terragen, but you were not effected in any way.

Riley: Nope, but my family sure was...

Panel 2: The Man has picked up a book called 'Of Goblins and Jackals: An abusive spiritual relationship triggered by a tedious chapter in a certain spider's Career'

Riley: Least one of them's found work as a film critic online, but the other four? It's hard to figure out whether or not we have to stock up for when any of them want to Taste something!

Man: But you said just the other week that they don't need to eat.

Riley: Course they don't... but sadly, that doesn't stop Citrine from helping herself to a breakfast, lunch, and dinner.

Man: Quite.

Panel 3: Riley is nodding her head down in remorse.

Riley: I mean, they're nice and all, they act to protect me in times of trouble...

Man: Like any symbiotic entity stemming from your own life force should.

Panel 4: Close up on the Man's bearded face.

Man: But still, you're still a young girl at this point and have all the time in the world to figure out what you want to do in the world.

Panel 5: The man glances to Riley, who has gotten off the Couch.

Man: There's a new need for superheroes these days. You said you once wanted to be a Superhero?

Riley: Yeah, when I was Eight... Then I kinda... grew out of it. But now that I'm like this...

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Panel 1: The man grasps Riley's arms as he tells her something important.

Man: Listen to me.

Panel 2: The man's face is silloetted as we close in on that.

Man: Just because you haven't shown your powers yet doesn't mean you are not an Inhuman.

Panel 3: Riley is surprised, but still flattered

Man: If you do start to show your powers, please do some good with such a gift. You promise?

Riley: Sure.

Panel 4: Riley takes the Weapon that she pulled from the stone as she leaves.

Man: and when you do, don't try to piggyback off the decade-old spiteful squabblers of heroics past!

Riley: I'll keep that in mind.

Panel 5: We get a full body shot of her Psychologist as he waves goodbye: Dr. Judas Traveler

Riley: Have a nice day, Dr. Traveler!

Traveler: Thank you! I'll see you next Wednesday!

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Panel 1: Riley rides her Keyblade like a flying broomstick as it soars into the sky, taking up half the page.
Panel 2: Riley picks up her phone and calls up home.

Voice: So, how was the Shrink?

Riley: You have no idea what I had to get off my chest.

Voice: Try me.

Panel 3: Riley is flying through a cityscape.

Riley: You remember when you guys were taken in and deemed inhuman?

Voice: Yeah?

Riley: and how your physical existence is tied symbiotically to my life force?

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Panel 1: It reveals Citrine cooking some stir-fried rice. She is exactly who you think she is.

Citrine: But the fact is that we're always here for you, even when it's tough.

Panel 2: Citrine takes a sip from her orange juice.

Riley: So, you'd keep me safe... even when I tell him everything?

Panel 3: Citrine spits out her OJ

VFX: SPIT TAKE!

Panel 4: Citrine screams into the phone.

Citrine: What!?

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Panel 1: Riley is talking with Citrine.

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Panel X: Social, Drazzle, and Cornfed are standing in front of Riley.

Social Butterfly: So just puke out the Ghostly Dragon guy out of your body so we can take it down like we do with every last one of 'em we find, m'kay?♪

Panel Y: A rainbow of energy flows over Riley as she stands back up again...

Riley: You... ignorant harlot!

Panel Z: Riley's eyes ignite with cosmic power as she roars in fancy text.

Riley: 'I AM THE LAST ONE!

[edit] Leobert

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Panel 1: Riley's body erupts in flames which engulf the room.
Panel 2: a chibified Social is flailing about in panic to an equally chibified Cornfed and Drazzle's apathy and annoyance. Gothic Lolita merely shrugs.

Social Butterfly:

Drazzle: And this kind of fire is different, how?

Gothic Lolita: Pthf, I've survived far worse burns than that, Just ask the Big Kahuna!*

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Panel 3: Social and Lol bare witness as the fire has cleared up with Riley's form replaced with that of the Stone Statue's model...

Voice: What's the matter, scared?

Panel 4: ...The Dragon Lion Leobert DeMaize!

Leobert: Or did it finally sink in as to why pickings have gotten slim nowadays?

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Panel 1: Social points to Cornfed.

Social Butterfly: Oh, Puh-lease! Corny here just took out one of 'em the other day!

Cornfed: Uh... Social? I don't think bragging like that's a good id-

Panel 2: WHOOSH! The Dragon-Lion dashes against Cornfed, grasping him by the throat as he dashes past the panel.
Panel 3: CRUSH! Cornfed is slammed against the wall by Leobert with Cornfed slammed against the 'U' in the Middle

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[edit] From the Desk of Peter Parker

So the Inhumans are pretty much galactic royalty, right? Always backstabbing each other to rule lesser members of their race with an iron fist? Well, I've recently divised a new classification system for Inhumans and how exposure to Terragen effects each lifeform differently.

Class G - Dead on the spot!

Class F - You get infected with an incredibly lethal disease that will leave you screwed over for all eternity

Class D - Wow! Look, Nothing!

Class C - This is where the cucoons start being a thing, Humans, Insects, Animals, even plant life can become inhuman! XD But with Class C, they end up very deformed and mutilated. They're likely to go rouge

Class B - Non-Humans, once made inhuman, manifest average human intellect and a relatively humanoid shape from this stage onwards. This is where the superhuman skills start showing up.

Class A - Superpowers manifest starting with this class, the forms are indistinguishable from normal man barring additional limbs. For those who refer to these kids as 'New Coke' to Mutantkind, this class onwards is what they're talking about here.

Class S - As close to high and mighty as you can get without ending up in...

Class X - (pronounced Class-KEY) This is where the X-men lite superheroics stop and the George R.R. Martin-type urgency starts. You are considered among the highest of cosmic royalty but you end up becoming catnip for assassins omniversewide!

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Panel 1: We see a bust shot of Yen-Sid

Narration: My name is Yen-Sid.

Panel 2: Eraqus and Xehanort are Arm Wrestling, Yen-Sid is reading a book and is thus far removed from the relatively minor conflict

Narration: I've been called a resident wallflower by my peers,

Panel 3: Full Body of Yen Sid holding his Keyblade backhand.

Narration: But the fact of the matter is, I hold phenomenal power yet untapped.

Panel 4: An even younger Yen Sid is floating by the pants in front of Maleficent of Light.

Narration: My master sees it.

Panel 5: Eraqus and Yen Sid are protecting Xehanort and Masako from a darkside heartless.

Narration: My friends see it.

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Panel 1: Yen-Sid's shadow alludes to his future as Master Yen-Sid.

Narration: And I've been told of a long future that might be ahead of me.

Panel 2: Yen-Sid is walking through a Sideshow Pier, passing by...

Narration: But here I am, hiding undercover in the average life of a normal young teenager...

Panel 3: A young woman with messy blue hair and a navy-blue Tye-Dye shirt and bell-bottom jeans.

Narration: But it's here that we meet one of many who are far from normal.

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Narration: My name is Scrier.

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Panel 1: The Woodcarver has lit a candle.

Woodcarver: Tell me, child.

Panel 2: The woodcarver picks up a book.

Woodcarver: Do you believe in the power of imagination?

Panel 3: A series of carvings line the panel.

Woodcarver: A story that allows humans, animals, machines and monsters to evolve as such stories do,

Panel 4: The Witch pushes the wooden Pizza Planet Truck across the Table.

Woodcarver: to change, to adapt, to live in perfect harmony.

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Panel 1: Sully is reacting in fear over Boo.

Woodcarver: Yes, the magic gifts of the will-o'-the-wisps bind together the four forms of corporal spirits

Panel 2: Sully closes the door with Boo inside her bed.
Panel 3: Sully walking through the Locker Room with Boo clinging to his back

Woodcarver: Humans had superpowers.

Panel 4: Merida gives her mother a cake.
Panel 5: Elinor is turned into a bear.

Woodcarver: Animals had Evolution.

Panel 6: Wall-E is flying across space with a fire extinguisher

Woodcarver: Machines had curiosity

Panel 7: Riley (Who was a Toddler at that point) laughing at the Jokes of a Monster
Panel 8: A emotion canister fills up with Joy.

Woodcarver: And Monsters had magic.

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Panel 1: A Monstropolis Paper about the energy crisis.

Woodcarver: But there are conditions in which a huge chunk of any of the four could be stripped of their gifts.

Panel 2: Wall-E comparing his run-down tracks to those of a De-Activated Wall-E

Woodcarver: Be it they be isolated from the races, or abandoned outright...

Panel 3: Kevin tending to her family

Woodcarver: One faction pruning another or maybe...

Panel 4: The portly passengers of the Axiom drinking their lunch-in-a-cup

Woodcarver: They just never bother with them.

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Panel 1: Lightning McQueen racing with Chick Hicks.

Woodcarver: Regardless of how these stories turn out, there's always a way for the pendulum to swing back.

Panel 2: Mr. Incredible looking through the Kronos computer

Woodcarver: Some sought-after by choice...

Panel 3: Boo holding up one of her drawings in Sulley's bed.

Woodcarver: And some are found by sheer happenstance...

Panel 4: Joy catching the Train of Thought

Woodcarver: But whenever there is a big change, there will always be someone needed to push it in.

Panel 5: A marble statue's face is shown up close.

Woodcarver: And when that time comes, the power of the Dragon Lions will allow the universe to be born anew.

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Panel 1: Four Year Old Boo.

Woodcarver: This human child became a believer of true balance

Panel 2: Six-Year-Old Boo and Four-Year-Old Bonnie

Woodcarver: And in time, one believer became two...

Panel 3: Eight-Year-Old Riley, Nine-Year-Old Boo, and Seven-Year-Old Bonnie

Woodcarver: ...Then two became three...

Panel 4: Eleven-Year-Old Riley, Twelve-Year-Old Boo, Ten-Year-Old Frisk, and Ten-Year-Old Bonnie

Woodcarver: ...and then four!

Panel 5: Riley, Boo, Frisk and Bonnie with three shadows behind them.

Woodcarver: And this is the story of how four became eight ...and beyond!

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[edit] Introduction

So, The Archie Action Line's pretty hot stuff, am I right? So I came up with a pretty big idea that could make you a pretty big name, or at least a lot bigger than you already are. I hereby present to you a trio of new talent poached straight from the internet, each for a specific six-issue miniseries.

First up is Kingdom Hearts re:worded, based on the hit Video Game Franchise by Square Enix. This spin-off comic focuses on the life of thirteen-year-old Riley Andersen which has been somewhat normal since an encounter with a strange monster scientist left her with her right eye meddled with and a quintet of Hard-Light Runesealed beings added to her family because of it. While her family is making progress adjusting to the change, Riley predictably isn't and it shows in her relationship with Citrine. While Citrine does love Riley very much and will do anything in her power to figure out her current condition, Riley merely pushes her away until towards the end of the miniseries but that's a bridge that will be crossed later on. Let's focus on how the Kingdom Hearts elements come into play. See, the true purpose of the comic is to explore the strong friendship of Eraqus and Xehanort alongside other characters like Yen-Sid, Masako, and newcomer Riley. The first issue deals with Eraqus and Xehanort meeting Riley while struggling with the act of smyting a Darkside Heartless until Riley pulls an ancient Keyblade from a mirror throne in her local library and then promptly runkledunked the Heartless most mercilessly. Issue two deals with the aftermath of that while the group help an expedition team make it to Atlantis, which they do! Issue Three sees the introduction of Dory, who is able to morph into a special human form in the Kingdom Hearts Universe. Issue Four which takes place in the world of Meet the Robinsons has an in-depth perspective of Riley's relationship with the Runesealed that dissects exactly who these characters are. And all throughout the comic, they chase after an enigmatic woman in a black coat and explore intergalactic space stations with built in digital universes called Dreamcasts that are controlled by an elite group of eight alien creatures known simply as the Master Players. It's in Dreamcast U-42 that the big climax of the book kicks in. After Lewis' fate changes, Eraqus, Xehanort, Riley and her Runesealed companions have to escape the Dreamcast, or face the wrath of the Master Players that govern the entire fleet.

Like I said, Kingdom Hearts is an iconic Triple-A video game franchise up there with Zelda or Dragon Warrior. Whereas Undertale, our second miniseries, is not based on a big-budget franchise such as this. Rather, it is based on a game that one guy made in the basement of Andrew Hussie while composing the musical score for Homestuck. This focuses on Frisk's life following the pacifist run and the shenanagans that come along with it. A trio of standalone issues following the monsters dealing with Racism much like how the X-Men were designed to reflect it in america. And a subplot about Asgore Dreemurr running for president all leading up to the Big Kahuna of the second half: The Political Conquest of America by the evil Harriet Kasanov. Now, Harriet is one of those Nick Fury type of characters that cross over between comics, It will have to involve the shaking of hands in terms of the licencers, but it is very much in line with the themes I want to explore with this particular line of books. With Harriet, she represents the downward spiral of cronyist demons claiming control and corporate conformity reigning supreme. She's the type of candidate that's bad not just for the recently-freed monsters, but for our human rights as well! Frisk tries to negotiate with the President Elect as the ambassador of monsterkind, but she refuses and traps them in an alternate universe... The Same Digital Universe that lurks within Dreamcast U-42! And it's here where Frisk meets Riley and they both meet the notorious Player 01: Our stand-in for those masochistic piles of secrets who probably would play Undertale's Infamous Genocide Route because they clearly have no soul.

Our last miniseries comes from our old buddies at Sega. To be more specific: Remember when you did a NiGHTS Comic? Yeah, you totally did a comic based on NiGHTS into Dreams way back when written by Dan Slott who went on to do the current ongoing of Spiderman! After a standalone issue featuring NiGHTS meeting Owl and re-acquainting the comic readers with the world of Nightopia. The four issues that follow are an adaptation of Journey of Dreams in the same vain as the original eight issues from the late 90s. Issue Number Five takes place a year after where thirteen-year-old Will and Helen meet sixteen-year-old Claris and Elliot and hi-jinx ensue from their kind bouncing off of one another. And of course, the Final Issue of this original miniseries sees NiGHTS fighting alongside Sonic the Hedgehog against Padloque and the Deadly Six in reference to the NoD level of Sonic Lost World.

And what happens if these eighteen comics turn out to be successful? Well, we make Undertale an ongoing series, we do a special showcase for Kingdom Hearts' Ongoing, and NiGHTS? A bi-monthly series should be good enough. But the big thing we want to establish is a major arc that directly leads in to Kingdom Hearts III, crossing across the five Archie Action lines on the very month of KHIII's release. Issue one is a Sonic Universe Issue which sees Harriet revealed as Player 07, meaning that Player 01 has full reign over the Earth and its populace.

Now, our first hassle is that Disney scuttled the comic rights to all of screen-based properties to Joe Comics. But remember, Disney didn't mention Kingdom Hearts in the deal. So, I think we may have a bit of a chance. Next step would be to get Square Enix's attention and ask them for their blessing since a six-issue miniseries would be a lot more time to flesh them out than a mere tutorial level.

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