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“You can drop it when we get home so hang in there.” Amu said before hurrying home.
“You can drop it when we get home so hang in there.” Amu said before hurrying home.
==Chapter 3==
==Chapter 3==
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“What did you find out?” Dia asked, after Amu returned to her room, once again ignoring her family. Meanwhile Miki dropped the change.
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4516956/3/Bad_Egg
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“It seems that the new Queen can Character Transform” Amu told her, as Miki pulled out a sketch of Clown Drop.
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“She doesn’t seem to have any problems with simply breaking X eggs.” Su added.
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“How does she attack?” Dia asked.
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“Heat seeking juggling pins.” Amu replied.
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“They seem to work against X eggs, but I think an X Chara could easily break them.” Miki commented.
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“So if we go with Miki’s original idea she won’t be a problem.” Ran cheered.
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“We might even be able to use her to our advantage.” Dia commented.
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“Really? How?” Amu asked.
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“With her around, the group won’t be as opposed to splitting up.” Dia explained.
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“If the Guardians split up, it would make it easier to capture an X egg without the others knowing.” Amu realized.
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“And if things start getting out of hand, we could quit the Guardians. Since Amu isn’t as valuable to them since she’s no longer the only one who can Character Transform.” Miki added.
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“So, tomorrow we start collecting X eggs?” Su asked.
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“Correct, but only a few. We don’t have a place to keep a lot of them.” Amu replied.
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“Good night.” Miki said as she went into her egg.
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“I think we should do something to keep the Queen from getting a big head.” Amu suggested.
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“Do you have any ideas?” Dia asked.
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“Yeah, listen to this.” Amu began to explain
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-The Next day- Homeroom-
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Amu was sitting at her desk, staring out the window. It took almost all of her will power to not let out a giggle at her plan. Everything was set and now all she had to do was wait for the Queen to make her appearance.
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Right on cue, the Queen entered with her flock of followers. As usual she didn’t show any expression on her face. She approached her desk at casual pace. One of her fans pulled her chair out for her.
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“Now, Su!” Amu whispered.
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“Chips. Syrup. Whipped Cream”
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A squishy sound was heard as Rima sat down. She stood up immediately and looked at her chair.
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Someone put a PIE in her chair.
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She looked behind her and noticed that the back of her skirt was covered with the fore mentioned dessert. Some of it even seeped through to her panties! Kusu Kusu was laughing so hard that she wasn’t even able to breathe. You really couldn’t blame her for when her eye began to twitch violently.
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“Don’t worry, Mashiro. I’m sure some of the guys wouldn’t mind licking it off of you.” Amu commented with a grin. I’ve been spending too much time around Ikuto!
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Once everyone’s mind processed the image, Rima’s face became bright red. Out of anger or embarrassment, no one could tell. And several of the boys immediately passed out.
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-After School- Royal Garden-
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“That was really uncalled-for, Hinamori-san.” Tadase said.
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“What was uncalled for?” Yaya asked. All this talk about ‘the incident’ was making Rima’s face turn red again.
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“Why’s the new Queen so red?” a person asked. The Guardians looked to where the voice came from. The newer Guardians had a slightly confused look on their faces. The Older Guardians had looks of joy.
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“Kukai” Amu whispered. Dia was wrong! He didn’t abandon me. He came back.
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“Yo, it’s been awhile.” Kukai said as he approached.
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“Souma-kun” Tadase said as he got up to greet the former Jack.
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“Kukai! Why are you here? Were you kicked out of middle school already?” Yaya asked as she began clinging to Kukai’s arm.
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“Silly, I was just passing by. The middle school’s right next door, so it’s not like I have to take a long walk to see you guys” Kukai replied.
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So he didn’t come to see me. He just came because we were close by. If the middle school was farther away, he wouldn’t have even bothered to come see us. Dia was right! He doesn’t care!
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“Who is this person?” Rima asked.
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“He is the former Jack’s chair. I believe his name is Souma Kukai” Kairi replied.
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“Daichi-kun!” Ran squealed as she glomped on to the sport loving Chara. “I missed you.” Pepe started glaring at Ran.
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“Woah calm down. I didn’t realize you’d miss me that much!” Daichi replied as he tried to pry himself from Ran, to little effect.
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“Please don’t leave me again! Don’t you realize you’re the only man I’ve ever cheered for?” Ran said as she clung on tighter. Miki took out her sketch pad and began drawing the scene in front of her.
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“Why is it that you’re all acting out of character?!” Pepe yelled, obviously upset with the scene before her.
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“What do you mean?” Musashi, the green haired samurai Chara of Kairi, asked.
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“She has never been this clingy! Amu has never been in her ‘Cool and Spicy’ character for the whole day! And Su hasn’t said ‘desu’ once in the past two days!” Pepe ranted.
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Of course this discussion was taking place on the side opposite of the Guardians. If it wasn’t, the other Guardians would have probably thought Pepe to be right. But sadly, it wasn’t.
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“It’s time for the patrols.” Kairi said after glancing at his watch.
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“I think I’ll go with Yaya today.” Rima commented.
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No way! She thought I was serious yesterday?
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“Then I’ll just go with Hinamori.” Kukai said.
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“Ran, Miki, Su, we’re leaving!” Amu called to her Chara.
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“Alright now its time for…” Kukai began
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There was a popping noise and Amu’s hair clip changed to a heart shape.
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“High Speed Dash!” Amu and Kukai called out in unison.
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-One HSD Later- The Park-
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“Doesn’t moving you body just take the pressure off?” Kukai asked.
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“I guess” was Amu’s mumbled replied.
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“So what’s wrong?”
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“Nothing’s wrong.” Amu replied
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“This is nice.” Daichi said as he lay in the grass in another part of the park. Ran laid down next to him and began to cuddle. Once more, Miki was drawing the scene in front of her.
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“Pepe did have a point.” Daichi commented.
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“What do you mean?” Ran asked.
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“Well you never been this affectionate before.” Daichi pointed out.
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“You were the only guy I cheered for!” Ran exclaimed.
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“You cheered for a lot of other people.” Daichi retorted.
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“But you were the only guy she cheered for.” Miki explained.
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“D-Do you not like me?” Ran asked, a tear streaming down her face.
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“I-I-It’s not that. I-Its just that I’ve been seeing someone else.” Daichi replied, obviously nervous because of the crying girl. How did Kiseki make rejecting a girl look so easy?
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“So you’ve been stringing her along?!” Miki accused.
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“That’s not very nice.” Su commented.
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“N-N-N-N-N-No! Its not like that” Daichi tried to explain.
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“Jerk!” Ran said before punching him in the face, effectively knocking him out. Tears streaking down her face all the while.
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“Are you going to be ok, Ran?” Su asked.
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“Y-Yeah, I’ll be fine.” Ran replied as her tears started to calm down.
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“Let’s head back to Amu” Su suggested.
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“You guys go ahead I’ll catch up in a bit.” Miki told them.
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-3 Minutes Later-
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“What were you doing, Miki?” Su asked as Miki floated over to them.
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“N-Nothing” Miki replied with a slight blush.
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“Where’s Daichi?” Kukai asked as he returned with two ice cream cones.
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“Um, about that…” Miki trailed off
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“You see we kinda-“ Ran began, but stopped when see felt a familiar feeling.
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“X-eggs!” Ran, Miki and Su cried out in unison.
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==Chapter 4==
==Chapter 4==
“X eggs!” The Chara trio called out in unison.
“X eggs!” The Chara trio called out in unison.

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