Talk to the person next to you

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Turning your head away from the car window, you speak to your sister. "Eileen, where are we going?"
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Turning your head away from the car window, you speak to the person next to you a girl 14 years old.
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"This place is kinda faraway isn't it?"
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"Its a waste of our winter break... I hope there's at least internet."
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Your sister Eileen, who has wavy brown hair and brown eyes, stares back, apparently bored.
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They had arrived from their academy several weeks before, hurriedly rushed to go on a business trip by their father.
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"It's dads idea.  We're going to waste our break in one of  his projects again."
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He was as simple as you could describe it a man who deals with
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This wasn't the first time they went to an unknown  destination as their father was crazy about old junk or historic items as Dad would put it.
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But why such a secluded place there were no houses or paved roads to see only unkempt land.
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*A Few moments later you arrive*
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You open the car door, stepping outside you see an old mansion. The walls were gray and the ivy/moss overtook some parts of the wall
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The grass overgrown and marble statues sprawled on their side.
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All in all it had a look of a house nobody lived in for centuries.
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Revision as of 22:52, 14 July 2009

Turning your head away from the car window, you speak to the person next to you a girl 14 years old. "This place is kinda faraway isn't it?" "Its a waste of our winter break... I hope there's at least internet."

They had arrived from their academy several weeks before, hurriedly rushed to go on a business trip by their father. He was as simple as you could describe it a man who deals with

Under construction *****


Walk around the area

Go inside the mansion

Get back in the car

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