Raygen
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5'5" tall, powerful build. Dark hair, eyes & skin. Male. | 5'5" tall, powerful build. Dark hair, eyes & skin. Male. | ||
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| + | Violent, racist, sexist & debauched. Is a vice ridden bully. Acts stupid, but is actually quite intelligent & knows not to back chat a superior, to much. For some reason likes to collect the severed pinky fingers of his kills. | ||
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Probably not a Mary-Sue, although a character can go either way at this point. Fanfiction writers should pay attention to ensure that their characters aren't getting too Sue-ish. For an RPG or original fiction character, however, you're probably perfectly fine. | Probably not a Mary-Sue, although a character can go either way at this point. Fanfiction writers should pay attention to ensure that their characters aren't getting too Sue-ish. For an RPG or original fiction character, however, you're probably perfectly fine. | ||
Current revision as of 16:04, 21 January 2009
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Brief Description
I created Raygen for the short lived Warhammer Kill Team RP. I got the basic idea from Crusades, which I was reading at the time. I took the personality of one of the characters, the Cormyrean that was hung for murder, then turned it up to 11. Also, I've been wanting to play a character like this for sometime, to contrast with the more dignified or noble combat types that I've played here before.
Physical Description
5'5" tall, powerful build. Dark hair, eyes & skin. Male.
Personality
Violent, racist, sexist & debauched. Is a vice ridden bully. Acts stupid, but is actually quite intelligent & knows not to back chat a superior, to much. For some reason likes to collect the severed pinky fingers of his kills.
Mary Sue Rating
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Probably not a Mary-Sue, although a character can go either way at this point. Fanfiction writers should pay attention to ensure that their characters aren't getting too Sue-ish. For an RPG or original fiction character, however, you're probably perfectly fine.
