Raygen

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	== Physical Description ==		== Physical Description ==
	5'5" tall, powerful build. Dark hair, eyes & skin. Male.		5'5" tall, powerful build. Dark hair, eyes & skin. Male.
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		+	== Personality ==
		+	Violent, racist, sexist & debauched. Is a vice ridden bully. Acts stupid, but is actually quite intelligent & knows not to back chat a superior, to much. For some reason likes to collect the severed pinky fingers of his kills.
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		+	== Mary Sue Rating ==
		+	19:
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		+	Probably not a Mary-Sue, although a character can go either way at this point. Fanfiction writers should pay attention to ensure that their characters aren't getting too Sue-ish. For an RPG or original fiction character, however, you're probably perfectly fine.

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Current revision as of 16:04, 21 January 2009

Contents 1 Brief Description 2 Physical Description 3 Personality 4 Mary Sue Rating

Brief Description

I created Raygen for the short lived Warhammer Kill Team RP. I got the basic idea from Crusades, which I was reading at the time. I took the personality of one of the characters, the Cormyrean that was hung for murder, then turned it up to 11. Also, I've been wanting to play a character like this for sometime, to contrast with the more dignified or noble combat types that I've played here before.

Physical Description

5'5" tall, powerful build. Dark hair, eyes & skin. Male.

Personality

Violent, racist, sexist & debauched. Is a vice ridden bully. Acts stupid, but is actually quite intelligent & knows not to back chat a superior, to much. For some reason likes to collect the severed pinky fingers of his kills.

Mary Sue Rating

19:

Probably not a Mary-Sue, although a character can go either way at this point. Fanfiction writers should pay attention to ensure that their characters aren't getting too Sue-ish. For an RPG or original fiction character, however, you're probably perfectly fine.