User talk:Extravirginoliveoil

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If you're going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to punctuate properly. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue. --Platypus 20:55, 11 March 2018 (UTC)

Please watch your verb tenses. You keep slipping into past tense and this story is present tense. --Platypus 11:48, 12 March 2018 (UTC)

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