User talk:Lightspeedsex

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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format. --Dirty Me 08:19, 12 September 2014 (UTC)

You need to pay attention to the status. For example, the library is a level 2 area, as seen on the page you branched from. Also, there is already a Jail location, so that should have been used, not a new one. I have changed these, but please pay more attention as you continue making new pages from an already existing story. --Dirty Me 03:23, 20 October 2014 (UTC)

Please don't add to one of my stories unless you can write using promper grammar and punctuation and you can write well. Smutty Sex Romp is not about completely random events. If you write that someone has been injured, give the reader some hint of what the injury is! When someone's hurt, usually an ambulance takes them to the hopsital. It makes no sense for the police to show up, guns drawn, or for them to lock a man in a cell with an apparently crazy woman. --Platypus 13:24, 20 October 2014 (UTC)