User talk:Ohyes

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Revision as of 03:18, 11 February 2014 by Ohyes (Talk | contribs)

If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Smutty Sex Romp, you need to use proper grammar. Please review punctuation with dialogue. --Platypus 02:48, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

Apologies. Not the best with grammar. Trying to clean it up as much as I can. Not even that great at writing this sort of stuff but these parts of the story stayed untouched for a long time. I'll review. Sorry for my mistakes.

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