User talk:Hwolin

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If you're going to post in one of my stories, read the warning first: anything with poor grammar and bad punctuation will be immediately deleted. --Platypus 06:07, 17 August 2013 (UTC)

For starters, try reviewing punctuation with dialogue. --Platypus 15:09, 17 August 2013 (UTC)

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