User talk:Jealco

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Please review Punctuation with dialogue. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --Platypus 23:12, 17 October 2012 (UTC)

Please change the location listed in the status bar when your character changes locations. --Platypus 09:17, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Also, the choices should be choices your character can make, not choices she can't. She can choose to kick her shoes off, but she can't choose where they land unless she's aiming. --Platypus 12:20, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Minor Edits

You edited Visit the clothing department, marking the edit as "minor".

• Checking the minor edit box signifies that the current and previous versions differ only superficially (typographical corrections, etc.), in a way that no editor would be expected to regard as disputable.
• Any edit that changes the meaning of an article is not a minor edit, even if the edit concerns a single word, and it is improper to mark such an edit as minor.

Adding a new choice ("Look for some new nightclothes") is not a minor edit. There's nothing wrong with the edit per se, but please don't mark such edits as minor. Thanks Anedwcan 17:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)