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(Created page with 'Please watch your verb tenses. You keep slipping out the proper present tense into the past tense. And it's rarely necessary to use 'began to' or 'started to'. Instead beginni…')
(Created page with 'Please watch your verb tenses. You keep slipping out the proper present tense into the past tense. And it's rarely necessary to use 'began to' or 'started to'. Instead beginni…')
Current revision as of 03:16, 12 June 2010
Please watch your verb tenses. You keep slipping out the proper present tense into the past tense. And it's rarely necessary to use 'began to' or 'started to'. Instead beginning to get naked and starting to fuck, just let the characters get naked and fuck! --Platypus 03:16, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
