User talk:SaylorTwift21
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All choices in my stories must be choices '''your character''' can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to stay last in the shower. | All choices in my stories must be choices '''your character''' can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to stay last in the shower. | ||
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--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC) | --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 17:14, 26 April 2020
If you’re going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue.
Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.
All choices in my stories must be choices your character can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to stay last in the shower.
The demon's power is taking over other people's bodies. It does not have the power to grow male genitals on female bodies!
--Platypus 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
