User talk:Anyname
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If you can't use proper grammar, I strongly suggest you post in some other author's story or write your own. I ''will'' delete anything I dislike that is posted in one of mine.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:36, 9 February 2014 (UTC) | If you can't use proper grammar, I strongly suggest you post in some other author's story or write your own. I ''will'' delete anything I dislike that is posted in one of mine.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:36, 9 February 2014 (UTC) | ||
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| + | I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person playing would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST) | ||
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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 23:42, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
Better, but make sure you include the status bar as well. --Platypus 02:44, 6 February 2014 (UTC)
Now try adding the hyperlink in the status bar, linking the page to the character being possessed, and put the bullets in front of the choices. Is it possible that you can't see that your pages aren't formatted like the rest of the pages in the story? --Platypus 21:47, 6 February 2014 (UTC)
If you're going to post in one of my stories, the choices must be choices your character can make. Your character can't choose what she's going to see inside a car that pulls up next to her.
And you need to use proper grammar. Review punctuation with dialogue if you are unfamiliar with the rules.
If you can't use proper grammar, I strongly suggest you post in some other author's story or write your own. I will delete anything I dislike that is posted in one of mine.--Platypus 16:36, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person playing would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --Anyname 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)
