Getting a job: Feedback
From Create Your Own Story
(Difference between revisions)
XJ347 (Talk | contribs)
(Created page with '---- Who ever created the first story arcs were pretty lame, lack of description in the story, so I made one that does. Now saying that, It seems readable to me, but I have no id…')
(Created page with '---- Who ever created the first story arcs were pretty lame, lack of description in the story, so I made one that does. Now saying that, It seems readable to me, but I have no id…')
Current revision as of 08:03, 27 January 2014
Who ever created the first story arcs were pretty lame, lack of description in the story, so I made one that does. Now saying that, It seems readable to me, but I have no idea if others like it. Not only that, I'm not sure if I describe the sex scenes well, or if they feel short or awkward. Mind letting me what you think, or opinions on what might make it better?
XJ347
