User talk:Platypus

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Hello, Platypus! I contributed to Smutty Sex Romp, and I fear that (as I received a message from you) that I somehow erred grammatically in my submission. Was it an automatic message, or did I do something wrong? Please let me know; I feel very bad because I fear I may have somehow wrecked your story in your eyes and I would hate for that to happen.
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Hello again Platypus!
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I also understand fully what you mean insofar as yearning for people to use decent grammar. I love to write and if someone scrawled all over one of my stories with things such as "omg lyke dewd!" I'd be rather upset.
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Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly.
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I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!
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If you like, I'm more than willing to direct you to the three submissions I made in hopes that if my error is small it can be fixed, or if it's large, it can all be erased in a timely manner so that your work can remain relatively unblemished. I did try to at least keep to the level of those others that have contributed, although I would like to pride myself at times with saying that I have excellent grammar.
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[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)
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I'm sorry to have left you with such a long message; I do like to talk, it seems. Nonetheless, I'll stop now and leave you alone for now. Toodles!
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[[User_talk:NeonxXxLights|NeonxXxLights]] 5:47pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)
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=Whose adventure?=
=Whose adventure?=
I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)
I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --[[User:Sisauq|Sisauq]] 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

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Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

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Hey Platypus, you replied to my story. I'm still new at this, so you want to help me with my story?--Nousherwan


Sorry about that, still new at this. Thanks for the fix. --Sisauq 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)

I'll start to add categories in the future as well, feel free to help edit my story. I could use someone whos a "grammar nazi" --BFEL 19:47, 2 April 2011 (UTC)

Article Tags

I can't help but notice some heavy abuse of the article tagging system. I was wondering if the TagNimbus system had some sort of way to edit the tags on an article because there's been many times that I've seen things that are out of place and could use removing. Take the tags for the Sandbox for example... --TheElderOnes 03:39, 6 April 2011 (UTC)


Hello, Platypus!

Hello again Platypus!

Oh dear. I see what you mean now and I feel really silly. I will ensure that it does not happen again! I will also go to scour my posts and fix them in case you didn't already. Thank you for telling me; criticism goes a long way in helping me get better!

NeonxXxLights 8:51pm, 3 May 2011 (-5GMT Eastern)

Whose adventure?

I'll not do that again, then (at least within the scope of SSR as it's your baby) - to be fair, though, I have seen plenty of published CYOA stuff that has a similar situation of you-the-reader choosing things that are completely outside you-the-character's control, though to be honest it did always feel a bit weird to me at the time. --Sisauq 20:45, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

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