A New Life

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You wake up and look around your hospital room, it's been months since you've seen anything else. A strange man is standing over you he is dressed in all white and as he notices you are awake he begins to speak.
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You wake up and look around your hospital room.  It's been months since you've seen anything else. A strange man is standing over you.  He is dressed in all white and as he notices you are awake, he speaks.
"Sir, I'm here to give you a refund."
"Sir, I'm here to give you a refund."
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You stare at him a moment
You stare at him a moment
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"What do I need a refund for I'll be dead in a week."
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"What do I need a refund for? I'll be dead in a week."
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"Well Sir, that's exactly why you need a refund we gave you a defective life the first time around. You never really had a shot."
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"Well Sir, that's exactly why you need a refund.  We gave you a defective life the first time around. You never really had a shot."
"Who the hell are you?"
"Who the hell are you?"
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"Sir, I don't have much time quickly pick an option"
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"Sir, I don't have much time.  Quickly pick an option."
*[[A college girl with a bladder problem.]]
*[[A college girl with a bladder problem.]]
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*[[A 10 year old boy with 3 arms.]]
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*[[A 10-year-old boy with 3 arms.]]
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*[[A middle aged woman with a split personality.]]
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*[[A middle-aged woman with a split personality.]]
*[[I'm not sure I want any of those things.]]
*[[I'm not sure I want any of those things.]]
[[Category: A New Life|*]]
[[Category: A New Life|*]]

Revision as of 01:08, 23 March 2008

You wake up and look around your hospital room. It's been months since you've seen anything else. A strange man is standing over you. He is dressed in all white and as he notices you are awake, he speaks.

"Sir, I'm here to give you a refund."

You stare at him a moment

"What do I need a refund for? I'll be dead in a week."

"Well Sir, that's exactly why you need a refund. We gave you a defective life the first time around. You never really had a shot."

"Who the hell are you?"

"Sir, I don't have much time. Quickly pick an option."

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