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You're doing great! I have a suggestion for one of the branches. I noticed that in one path Dwayne gets knocked out as a potential romantic rival [humiliated by the girls after trying to sneak into the locker room.] I'd like to see that path continue on, to where our hero fends off the advances of other girls (especially Katelyn), and [perhaps after several years] is on the point of pledging his eternal love for Amanda. However, in the interim, Amanda's dad hss divorced her mom and moved out, and right as it looks like there's going to be a "they lived happily ever after", Mom tries to steal Mark away for herself, or barring that at least convince her daughter to share Mark with her for as long as both Amanda and Mom still live. You don't have to, but I thought it might make a nice storyline. (It actually happened to me when I was younger... I ended up with my GF and her mom sharing me. That lasted about 5 years.) Keep up the good work! -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] | You're doing great! I have a suggestion for one of the branches. I noticed that in one path Dwayne gets knocked out as a potential romantic rival [humiliated by the girls after trying to sneak into the locker room.] I'd like to see that path continue on, to where our hero fends off the advances of other girls (especially Katelyn), and [perhaps after several years] is on the point of pledging his eternal love for Amanda. However, in the interim, Amanda's dad hss divorced her mom and moved out, and right as it looks like there's going to be a "they lived happily ever after", Mom tries to steal Mark away for herself, or barring that at least convince her daughter to share Mark with her for as long as both Amanda and Mom still live. You don't have to, but I thought it might make a nice storyline. (It actually happened to me when I was younger... I ended up with my GF and her mom sharing me. That lasted about 5 years.) Keep up the good work! -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] | ||
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| + | Brain fart. I of course meant Matt. Anyway, take your time, keep developing the story and I'll look forward to seeing it! -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] | ||
Revision as of 22:13, 26 December 2012
Please don't post incomplete pages. Complete pages include options so the story can continue. Also, please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page.
Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted. --Platypus 02:43, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
Second warning. Uncategorized pages will be edited or deleted.--Platypus 16:58, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
Final warning. Your uncategorized pages are now being deleted. If you continue to post uncategorized pages, you will be banned from the site.--Platypus 20:10, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
You're being given the same consideration as anyone else. If you cannot abide by the site rules and categorize your pages, you will have to find another site to post on. --Platypus 21:48, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
Love the way your new story is headed. I enjoy reading every new installment. Question: if I have a creative idea about how to extend it off a certain branch, should I transmit it to you? Another possibility is to post something on the Talk page of the story. Or would you prefer I simply go ahead and create it, with the idea being that once it's up, you can modify it if you want to? -- Teejay
Great! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your story as it develops. By the way, some of the other stories in the adult section are somewhat more about character development than raw sex. Check out Red Mobster, High School and Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year back at ya! -- Teejay
You're doing great! I have a suggestion for one of the branches. I noticed that in one path Dwayne gets knocked out as a potential romantic rival [humiliated by the girls after trying to sneak into the locker room.] I'd like to see that path continue on, to where our hero fends off the advances of other girls (especially Katelyn), and [perhaps after several years] is on the point of pledging his eternal love for Amanda. However, in the interim, Amanda's dad hss divorced her mom and moved out, and right as it looks like there's going to be a "they lived happily ever after", Mom tries to steal Mark away for herself, or barring that at least convince her daughter to share Mark with her for as long as both Amanda and Mom still live. You don't have to, but I thought it might make a nice storyline. (It actually happened to me when I was younger... I ended up with my GF and her mom sharing me. That lasted about 5 years.) Keep up the good work! -- Teejay
Brain fart. I of course meant Matt. Anyway, take your time, keep developing the story and I'll look forward to seeing it! -- Teejay
