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Indeed it is already 7 o'clock when you leave home. You heard mamas heavy breathing in her bedroom and know you don't have to hurry or need to be silent. She won't get awake until noon.
Indeed it is already 7 o'clock when you leave home. You heard mamas heavy breathing in her bedroom and know you don't have to hurry or need to be silent. She won't get awake until noon.
The air is fresh but already warm. Everything is peaceful.
The air is fresh but already warm. Everything is peaceful.
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You planned to go to the central station and take the next train to visit one of your friend. She stays with her parents for the vacations on a farm about 200 miles to the north. She said you could come around whenever you liked. But you didn't call her an so you can stillsafe the money for the ticket.  
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You planned to go to the central station and take the next train to visit one of your friend. She stays with her parents for the vacations on a farm about 200 miles to the north. She said you could come around whenever you liked. But you didn't call her an so you can still safe the money for the ticket.  
So what are you up to?
So what are you up to?

Current revision as of 19:33, 30 December 2012

Restart with introduction


Begin: Leaving

Wednesday morning at five o'clock

As the day begins

Silently closing her bedroom door

Leaving the note that she hoped would say more


She goes downstairs to the kitchen

Clutching her handkerchief

Quietly turning the backdoor key

Stepping outside, she is free


[Beatles]



Indeed it is already 7 o'clock when you leave home. You heard mamas heavy breathing in her bedroom and know you don't have to hurry or need to be silent. She won't get awake until noon. The air is fresh but already warm. Everything is peaceful. You planned to go to the central station and take the next train to visit one of your friend. She stays with her parents for the vacations on a farm about 200 miles to the north. She said you could come around whenever you liked. But you didn't call her an so you can still safe the money for the ticket.

So what are you up to?

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