Afraid of the Dark

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Both of you were supposed to go back to your home for Christmas break but instead..... to some vague destination where your parents were.
Both of you were supposed to go back to your home for Christmas break but instead..... to some vague destination where your parents were.
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"Can you please turn on the radio?" your sister trying to talk to the driver. Without saying a word and with a motion of his hands he turned it on.
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"Can you please turn on the radio?" your sister was trying to talk to the driver. Without saying a word and with a motion of his hands he turned it on.
However.... Ksshhhhh Kshhhhh No stations either u guessed, since there was no cellphone signals sure as hell no radio signals.  
However.... Ksshhhhh Kshhhhh No stations either u guessed, since there was no cellphone signals sure as hell no radio signals.  
You truly were in the middle of nowhere.......
You truly were in the middle of nowhere.......
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Turning the knob again the driver fruitlessly wasnt able to find  anything but static.
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Turning the knob again the driver fruitlessly wasn't able to find  anything but static.
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But then a station with a woman singing mournfully in French comes on but her voice chopped up it was a poor reception but still it was something.
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But then a station with a woman singing mournfully in French comes on but her voice chopped up.  It was a poor reception but still it was something.
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Revision as of 02:50, 28 October 2009

You were sitting in a car, while outside the trees surrounded you on all sides.

The driver was a pale tall man who wore the formal driver attire, and next to you your sister who was trying to get her cellphone to work. "Stupid thing no signals means were in the middle of nowhere" She sighed then looked out her window. Both of you were supposed to go back to your home for Christmas break but instead..... to some vague destination where your parents were.

"Can you please turn on the radio?" your sister was trying to talk to the driver. Without saying a word and with a motion of his hands he turned it on. However.... Ksshhhhh Kshhhhh No stations either u guessed, since there was no cellphone signals sure as hell no radio signals. You truly were in the middle of nowhere.......


Turning the knob again the driver fruitlessly wasn't able to find anything but static. But then a station with a woman singing mournfully in French comes on but her voice chopped up. It was a poor reception but still it was something.

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