What's the use...

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Revision as of 19:08, 30 September 2009

Authors note: Speach Thought Action/Narrative

Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit... said the man smiling

And I assure you...

This! Is one game you don't want that to happen in...

Damn it, I don't have a choice... or do I?

Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!

1!

The Teacher raises his hand alerting the armed soldier to his right to give him his side arm

What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?

2!

He raises the gun and takes aim

Kill or be killed... time to choose...

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 Authors note:
-'''Action'''
+'''Speach'''
 ''Thought''
-Speach
+Action/Narrative
-Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...
+'''Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...'''
-'''said the man smiling'''
+said the man smiling
-and I assure you...
+'''And I assure you...'''
-This! Is one game you don't want that to happen in...
+'''This! Is one game you don't want that to happen in...'''
 ''Damn it, I don't have a choice... or do I?''
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 ''Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!''
-!
+'''1!'''
-'''The Teacher raises his hand alerting the armed soldier to his right to give him his side arm'''
+The Teacher raises his hand alerting the armed soldier to his right to give him his side arm
 ''What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?''
-!
+'''2!'''
-'''He raises the gun and takes aim'''
+He raises the gun and takes aim
 ''Kill or be killed... time to choose...''