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HA! Fooled you! No story here. Maybe I will write one later=P
HA! Fooled you! No story here. Maybe I will write one later=P
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PS: If you check the edit page (Just do not edit it, click cancel after), I am working on one for you, since I am in the right mood. Just find the comment (the thing surrounded by <nowiki><!-- and --></nowiki> in the "edit" page")
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PS: Okay, I wrote one. Here, because I will create another path on this, is the story. I am also putting up the link, currently not being written, for what would happen with Loli on a camping trip with 5 guys who are more than willing to have sex with her, whether she wants to or not.
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Intro: (Yes, these right now are the internal thoughts. This is not what the story would look like.)
Intro: (Yes, these right now are the internal thoughts. This is not what the story would look like.)
"Hey Loli, me and a few friends were going to go camping," x named person said. Although I, being sweet and innocent, do not notice, he is always being pervy, trying to see down my shirt, walking behind me and studying my ass, always taking creepy pics. All in all, not the kind of guy someone would go on a camping trip with if they knew his true nature.
"Hey Loli, me and a few friends were going to go camping," x named person said. Although I, being sweet and innocent, do not notice, he is always being pervy, trying to see down my shirt, walking behind me and studying my ass, always taking creepy pics. All in all, not the kind of guy someone would go on a camping trip with if they knew his true nature.
Lets start again with the actual story:
Lets start again with the actual story:
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Richard waved me over to the side of the hall. "Hey Loli, me and a few friends were going to go camping for summer break."
 
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"The whole summer break?" I asked.
 
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He nodded at the same time as he said, "Yes."
 
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"Oh, well, let me check to see if it is okay with my parents."
 
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I called my dad real quick, confirming it was okay. Since he was always busy, it was not like we had anything planned, so I didn't think they would mind, but I wanted to confirm. I hung up and smiled at Richard.
 
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"Sure, it sounds like fun! I haven't been camping since I was a little girl. Do I need to bring anything?"
 
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"Just bring yourself," he told me.
 
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I got home, packed up some clothes, making sure to also pack some shorts since skirts and dresses would not be very good for hiking and other stuff, and other necessities, slipped into a light summer dress, a floppy sun hat, some sneakers for walking, and then headed out.
 
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I arrived at Richard's house, seeing the pickup and camper. "Wait," I said. "How will we all fit into the pickup?
 
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They looked at me strangely. "Well, only three will be able to fit in the cab, the driver and two others, unless you want to sit on someone's lap..."
 
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"Okay, I will." I told him. Two chuckled, but I could not figure out what was so funny.
 
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With that, we all climbed in, two of the guys sat in the back of the pickup, and I sat on one of the other guy's lap.
 
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"I am so excited!" I said to the people in the front with me. Well, and the two in the back, as the back window was slid open and they were both looking inside, talking to the others. "I haven't been camping since I was six. And I sat on my daddy's lap the whole way there too! This is just like when I was young!" I said, feeling warm nostalgia. The guys gave me strange looks, but I didn't care.
 
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Peter, the person who's lap I was sitting in, wrapped his arms around my waist. I giggled, then asked him what he was doing. "I just want to...keep you safe. Didn't your dad hold you when you were young?"
 
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I nodded yes, and he took that for proof that he was doing what he should.
 
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I wiggled a bit, trying to get comfortable on Peter's lap.
 
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Richard started introductions. (I found an interesting website that has all these "fun" names to use: www.jokes4us.com/dirtyjokes/dirtynames.html
 
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"So, you already know me," Richard said.
 
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Peter hit him softly on the shoulder. "Yeah, Dick is a real swell guy."
 
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I looked at Richard. "Dick? I thought your name is Richard?"
 
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He gave me a look that I didn't completely understand. "My full name is Richard Fitswell. But I go by Dick. Dick Fitswell. Only you and the teachers use Richard. All my friends call me Dick..."
 
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"Oh, sorry," I said, horrified that I had been calling him by the wrong name.
 
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"Anyways, the lucky guy who's lap you are sitting on is Peter Insidya."
 
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"In-cid-a?" I asked.
 
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"No, In-side-ya," he corrected.
 
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"Insidya. Where is that from?"
 
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"India, although it was changed a little when my ancestors immigrated to the US."
 
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"Oh, I was wondering why you were a bit darker! That makes so much sense!"
 
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Fortunately, I was unable to see Peter grimace behind me.
 
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"Anyways," Dick said, continuing, "this is Justin Hermouf."
 
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"Her-mouth?" I asked.
 
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"No, her-m-ow-f. Justin her-m-ow-f. Eastern European, before you ask." He laughed.
 
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"Okay, so, Dick Fitswell, Peter Insidya, Justin Hermouf." They each nodded in turn. "The two in the back?"
 
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One stuck his head in, reaching his hand across my chest to shake my hand.
 
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"Hi, I am Mike Oxhard."
 
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"Oxhard? Okay, this one is easy. UK, right?"
 
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I couldn't tell if he nodded, but he "Yep"ed right in my ear. His breath tickled a bit.
 
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The other one just said his name. "Harry Johnson."
 
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"Well, nice to meet you all. Dick Fitswell, Peter Insidya, Justin Hermouf, Mike Oxhard, and Harry Cox." I said, testing each of their names. "Dick, Peter, Justin, Mike, Harry. I am Loli! I am so excited to go camping with you guys."
 
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So, off they go camping. Loli, and 5 guys. Strange justifications ensue on how it seems innocent from Loli's point of view, but eventually she finds herself being fucked by all 5 guys.
 
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Loli is splashed by mud, completely covering her. She strips at camp, not thinking anything of it, as when she was camping before, she had been a young girl, and had bathed naked with the boys in the stream, and had changed with the boys with no problems. She is too innocent to think of the fact that all her female parts are now fully developed, not very aware of her own body and others thoughts about it. She also does not take into consideration the male parts of the other campers are also now fully developed, so the guys quite happily join her in her stream bath to wash off the mud. It will have sexual encounters, but I still need to figure out how to write about them "innocently".
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I also think I want to have her tied to a tree at some point. Now, I just need to figure out how to word it so it seems reasonable for her to be in this situation while still maintaining her "innocence".
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Hmm, debating on one more element. Do I want to have other campers involved in some way? Too bad the blindfold scene left her not wanting to do that. Then again, maybe I can find another way of introducing it, if I decide I really want to. Also wondering if I want to create an alternate "camping", one that Loli is not a willing participant? I haven't decided on this yet.
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Current revision as of 11:10, 12 June 2017

Seriously? She would go on a camping trip with a few "guys"?

Well, as you can imagine, by the end of it, naked guys tied to trees, raped within an inch of their lives, could be found all over the camp. And Loli? Well, she already went home. We are still not sure how the guys will make it back to, well, anywhere, tied to trees, no clothing, and exhausted half to death.

Oh, you want a story about "Loli" going on a camping trip with lots of guys? Sigh. Okay, if you really do not like this one, I can make a different one that will get you all hot and bothered.


HA! Fooled you! No story here. Maybe I will write one later=P

PS: Okay, I wrote one. Here, because I will create another path on this, is the story. I am also putting up the link, currently not being written, for what would happen with Loli on a camping trip with 5 guys who are more than willing to have sex with her, whether she wants to or not.


Hidden notes below

Intro: (Yes, these right now are the internal thoughts. This is not what the story would look like.) "Hey Loli, me and a few friends were going to go camping," x named person said. Although I, being sweet and innocent, do not notice, he is always being pervy, trying to see down my shirt, walking behind me and studying my ass, always taking creepy pics. All in all, not the kind of guy someone would go on a camping trip with if they knew his true nature.

Lets start again with the actual story:


More to come:

Hmm, debating on one more element. Do I want to have other campers involved in some way? Too bad the blindfold scene left her not wanting to do that. Then again, maybe I can find another way of introducing it, if I decide I really want to. Also wondering if I want to create an alternate "camping", one that Loli is not a willing participant? I haven't decided on this yet.

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