User talk:Alvin42
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I hope you don't mind, I cleaned up your story [[Arcade Glitch]] a bit, and added an extra option to each of the "skills" on the survey to round them out more. If you don't like the changes, feel free to revert the page on the history tab. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:26, 10 September 2015 (UTC) | I hope you don't mind, I cleaned up your story [[Arcade Glitch]] a bit, and added an extra option to each of the "skills" on the survey to round them out more. If you don't like the changes, feel free to revert the page on the history tab. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:26, 10 September 2015 (UTC) | ||
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+ | Thanks for responding about my changes to [[Arcade Glitch]]. I was hesitant to do any more until I knew how you reacted to what I've done so far. I'll probably be writing a bit for it now. And just as a bit of advice, when you message someone in their user talk page, you should probably sign your message. You can do that by using the second to last button on the edit window . . . the one that kind of looks like a signature, but not at all. Looking forward to contributing to the story. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 06:43, 17 September 2015 (UTC) | ||
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+ | I thought that I should explain why I'm organizing your story the way that I am, and let you decide if you want to use the changes, or abandon them. | ||
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+ | *First, by adding '''Arcade Glitch/''' in front of your links, it puts a link back to the beginning of your story at the top of the page; but it also stops your story from crossing into others, and other stories from crossing into yours accidentally. No one wants to see that in front of all the entries though, so I use the option to make the link look different than the name by adding what I want the reader to see after a | symbol, like this: <nowiki>[[Arcade Glitch/Orange|I want an orange]]</nowiki>. In this case, the page is called '''Arcade Glitch/Orange''', but the reader sees '''I want an orange'''. | ||
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+ | *Second, by adding the character's gender as the page name for the gender break away point '''Arcade Glitch/Male''' for example; then adding Arcade Glitch/Male/ in front of all entries that the reader is a male, a link back to the first male entry appears after the link back to the main page. Like the way I did it before, this makes it easier to restart the story. I also add a sub category by adding <nowiki>[[Category: AG/Male]], [[Category: AG/Female]], or [[Category: AG/Futa]] after [[Category: Arcade Glitch]]</nowiki> as this lets the readers who like to browse by the index page narrow their search by gender. | ||
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+ | Hopefully, you see the logic behind this system, if not then I apologize for mucking up your story. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 07:23, 17 September 2015 (UTC) | ||
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+ | I restored my original work under the suggested branch. It wasn't too difficult using the history feature. I was planning on some paths leading to restoring the girls to their young looking state. If you would rather limit that to a specific splinter (Vintage Edition?) I can forgo that though. I wasn't sure how sexual you wanted things. I may have read too much into how affected the game worlds would be by the sex mods, and went overboard. I'd rather stay close to your original concept rather than veering way off-course. If you want me to tone things down, just give me a holler. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 12:45, 18 September 2015 (UTC) |
Current revision as of 12:45, 18 September 2015
Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 16:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
Second warning. Uncategorized pages will be edited or deleted.--Platypus 10:25, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
Final warning. Your uncategorized pages are now being deleted. If you continue to post uncategorized pages, you will be banned from the site.--Platypus 15:42, 14 March 2015 (UTC)
I hope you don't mind, I cleaned up your story Arcade Glitch a bit, and added an extra option to each of the "skills" on the survey to round them out more. If you don't like the changes, feel free to revert the page on the history tab. --Elerneron 03:26, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for responding about my changes to Arcade Glitch. I was hesitant to do any more until I knew how you reacted to what I've done so far. I'll probably be writing a bit for it now. And just as a bit of advice, when you message someone in their user talk page, you should probably sign your message. You can do that by using the second to last button on the edit window . . . the one that kind of looks like a signature, but not at all. Looking forward to contributing to the story. --Elerneron 06:43, 17 September 2015 (UTC)
I thought that I should explain why I'm organizing your story the way that I am, and let you decide if you want to use the changes, or abandon them.
- First, by adding Arcade Glitch/ in front of your links, it puts a link back to the beginning of your story at the top of the page; but it also stops your story from crossing into others, and other stories from crossing into yours accidentally. No one wants to see that in front of all the entries though, so I use the option to make the link look different than the name by adding what I want the reader to see after a | symbol, like this: [[Arcade Glitch/Orange|I want an orange]]. In this case, the page is called Arcade Glitch/Orange, but the reader sees I want an orange.
- Second, by adding the character's gender as the page name for the gender break away point Arcade Glitch/Male for example; then adding Arcade Glitch/Male/ in front of all entries that the reader is a male, a link back to the first male entry appears after the link back to the main page. Like the way I did it before, this makes it easier to restart the story. I also add a sub category by adding [[Category: AG/Male]], [[Category: AG/Female]], or [[Category: AG/Futa]] after [[Category: Arcade Glitch]] as this lets the readers who like to browse by the index page narrow their search by gender.
Hopefully, you see the logic behind this system, if not then I apologize for mucking up your story. --Elerneron 07:23, 17 September 2015 (UTC)
I restored my original work under the suggested branch. It wasn't too difficult using the history feature. I was planning on some paths leading to restoring the girls to their young looking state. If you would rather limit that to a specific splinter (Vintage Edition?) I can forgo that though. I wasn't sure how sexual you wanted things. I may have read too much into how affected the game worlds would be by the sex mods, and went overboard. I'd rather stay close to your original concept rather than veering way off-course. If you want me to tone things down, just give me a holler. --Elerneron 12:45, 18 September 2015 (UTC)