The Handmaiden (Brianna)

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You spend a large majority of your time training to be a proper Echani warrior. On occasion you challenge one of your sisters to try and not be known as the Last Of the Hand Maidens. Today is one of those days.
You spend a large majority of your time training to be a proper Echani warrior. On occasion you challenge one of your sisters to try and not be known as the Last Of the Hand Maidens. Today is one of those days.
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"Sister I challenge you to a Echani battle so that i will no longer be the Last of The Hand Maidens."
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"Sister I challenge you to a Echani battle so that I will no longer be the Last of The Hand Maidens."
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Your half sister looks at you confidently, knowing that this is your twentieth attempt at moving up. "Fine sister I accept your challenge, as long as you remember what will happen if you loose."
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Your half sister looks at you confidently, knowing that this is your twentieth attempt at moving up. "Fine sister I accept your challenge, as long as you remember what will happen if you lose."
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You know what happens oh too well, if one looses they drop in rank (unless they are the lowest rank, as are you)and they also become the sex slave of the victor for the next twenty- four hours. "I accept the rules of engagement,and the Echani tradition." you reply
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You know what happens oh too well, if one loses they drop in rank (unless they are the lowest rank, as are you)and they also become the sex slave of the victor for the next twenty- four hours. "I accept the rules of engagement,and the Echani tradition." you reply
"Good" she says with an arrogant smile on her face.
"Good" she says with an arrogant smile on her face.
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You both meet up in the combat room in nothing but you underwear and your sister the same. Along with her your four other half-sisters are on the corners of the room watching to see who wins. The idea that every time you come here to challenge on of them you loose begins  to dominate your mind, "it's unfair" you think to yourself, " I spend the most time of them all training in order to become better, I should be the top Hand Maiden not the last." You become distracted by your thoughts of anger and frustration and don't notice that the challenge has started. With a quick glance you see that your sister is running at you poised to attack, you take your stance, and you:
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You both meet up in the combat room in nothing but you underwear and your sister the same. Along with her your four other half-sisters are on the corners of the room watching to see who wins. The idea that every time you come here to challenge on of them you lose begins  to dominate your mind, "it's unfair" you think to yourself, " I spend the most time of them all training in order to become better, I should be the top Hand Maiden not the last." You become distracted by your thoughts of anger and frustration and don't notice that the challenge has started. With a quick glance you see that your sister is running at you poised to attack, you take your stance, and you:
*[[Swing at her head]]
*[[Swing at her head]]

Revision as of 04:42, 21 August 2012

Your name is Brianna, but all of your sisters know you as the Last of The [Hand Maidens[1]], you serve under Jedi Master Atris who had run and hid underneath the polar regions on Telos IV after the Jedi Civil War.

You spend a large majority of your time training to be a proper Echani warrior. On occasion you challenge one of your sisters to try and not be known as the Last Of the Hand Maidens. Today is one of those days.

"Sister I challenge you to a Echani battle so that I will no longer be the Last of The Hand Maidens."

Your half sister looks at you confidently, knowing that this is your twentieth attempt at moving up. "Fine sister I accept your challenge, as long as you remember what will happen if you lose."

You know what happens oh too well, if one loses they drop in rank (unless they are the lowest rank, as are you)and they also become the sex slave of the victor for the next twenty- four hours. "I accept the rules of engagement,and the Echani tradition." you reply

"Good" she says with an arrogant smile on her face.

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You both meet up in the combat room in nothing but you underwear and your sister the same. Along with her your four other half-sisters are on the corners of the room watching to see who wins. The idea that every time you come here to challenge on of them you lose begins to dominate your mind, "it's unfair" you think to yourself, " I spend the most time of them all training in order to become better, I should be the top Hand Maiden not the last." You become distracted by your thoughts of anger and frustration and don't notice that the challenge has started. With a quick glance you see that your sister is running at you poised to attack, you take your stance, and you:

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