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Hey, just dropping in to say that I'm so goddamned happy that someone else has taken an interest in Bloodsport. After going through the pages you've created so far, I wanted to note that I'm liking Naomi and Jack's stories. I honestly had a lot planned and pre-written for Marissa, but I started to lose motivation when I felt like nobody was reading it. And then I log on and see that someone has started not one, but two new characters? I applaud you, sir. I applaud you. Perhaps now I'll get some serious work done on miss Proppes... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:13, 31 May 2012 (UTC) | Hey, just dropping in to say that I'm so goddamned happy that someone else has taken an interest in Bloodsport. After going through the pages you've created so far, I wanted to note that I'm liking Naomi and Jack's stories. I honestly had a lot planned and pre-written for Marissa, but I started to lose motivation when I felt like nobody was reading it. And then I log on and see that someone has started not one, but two new characters? I applaud you, sir. I applaud you. Perhaps now I'll get some serious work done on miss Proppes... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:13, 31 May 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Personally, I like how Jack seems to be a cautious, yet determined character. I don't see anything in his pages that would suggest that you're unfamiliar with writing teenage males. Having read through the new pages, too, I must say that I really do like the idea presented with the world war reenactment. I never would have thought of that, nor would I have thought of Naomi's "murder mystery" presentation. I'll get back to Marissa as soon as I can, but I'll be rewriting her stuff to move away from a "tournament ladder" sort of game to a "tribal warfare" one. The ladder flows nicely on paper, but writing that many individual fight scenes and avoiding repetition would be a biiiiiitch. But yeah, tribal warfare should be a little better. I may just steal Erin for an appearance in that path, if you don't mind. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:44, 1 June 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Hey, just dropping in to say that I'm so goddamned happy that someone else has taken an interest in Bloodsport. After going through the pages you've created so far, I wanted to note that I'm liking Naomi and Jack's stories. I honestly had a lot planned and pre-written for Marissa, but I started to lose motivation when I felt like nobody was reading it. And then I log on and see that someone has started not one, but two new characters? I applaud you, sir. I applaud you. Perhaps now I'll get some serious work done on miss Proppes... --TheElderOnes 07:13, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
Personally, I like how Jack seems to be a cautious, yet determined character. I don't see anything in his pages that would suggest that you're unfamiliar with writing teenage males. Having read through the new pages, too, I must say that I really do like the idea presented with the world war reenactment. I never would have thought of that, nor would I have thought of Naomi's "murder mystery" presentation. I'll get back to Marissa as soon as I can, but I'll be rewriting her stuff to move away from a "tournament ladder" sort of game to a "tribal warfare" one. The ladder flows nicely on paper, but writing that many individual fight scenes and avoiding repetition would be a biiiiiitch. But yeah, tribal warfare should be a little better. I may just steal Erin for an appearance in that path, if you don't mind. --TheElderOnes 06:44, 1 June 2012 (UTC)
