The Review/Adult Stories/The Devils Daughter
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Revision as of 09:04, 20 June 2016 by DirtyMeStoryTime (Talk | contribs)
DirtyMeStoryTime's review of The Devils Daughter:
Nothing reviewed yet. Sorry, this is over 600 pages. It will take a while. I will make notes on here as I go.
Some random grammar mistakes, some more obvious than others. Editor may need to touch up the pages and correct the mistakes, then it would not detract as much as it currently does.
Author tries to use extensive descriptions.
Some red links early on.
