User talk:JackalRobot
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Revision as of 20:45, 21 November 2011 by Heyoeveryone (Talk | contribs)
Reviewed!
Ooft! 6/10. To be honest, I expected that. I intentionally chose to make the story linear so I wouldn't have had to make a large amount of pages. Chapter 1 was basically just character development, so you would get an understanding of what a grave situation you were in. Chapter 2 will soon see more choices, and probably turn into some action sequence at the end. I'm only going to make three or four endings. If you would like, I can happily tell you what happens in the end.
Liked your review, your review was much tougher than my ones, but, that's not necessarily a bad thing. --Heyoeveryone 20:44, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
