User talk:Yihman1

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Revision as of 15:00, 30 June 2011 by Yihman1 (Talk | contribs)

Please make sure you include the category and status bar on the pages you post. --Platypus 15:45, 3 June 2011 (UTC)

Please try to work with the existing style of the story. The other pages in the story do not have underlines or name the page links with question marks. --Platypus 15:58, 4 June 2011 (UTC)

Please try to properly punctuate your work. --Platypus 00:54, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

You have good plot ideas, but you are seriously undermining your work with poor grammar, especially when you fail to punctuate dialogue properly. --Platypus 14:33, 30 June 2011 (UTC)

English was my absolute worst class in school. Grammar & Punctuation are not my strengths :( I was always great at math history and science though lol. Sorry for that I can't help it. --Yihman1

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