User talk:Narutostory
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Hey I´d just like to say that I enjoy your stories and all but I was just wondering why haven´t you posted it on the main page yet? Fletcher Peninsula
I'd like to get a lot more done before I do that. But thanks for the compliment!
I was just checking the 'Recent Changes' page. For the past few days, I've noticed that you've been writing many pages. I also noticed that the sizes of those pages were HUGE! At least double the length of my own story, Remember. I'd like to say, great job! I haven't fully read through the story(only the Naruto arena), but based on what I've seen, the story has a great concept, and plenty of reading time for those who have a lot of times on there hands.
Keep up the good work! Once you've finished writing The Grand Arena, I suggest the next story you write not include sex. Since stories that have explicit content such as that never get featured, and I'd like to make your next story featured. Anyway, good luck. I also suggest you put this on the main page already! So that everyone can see this!
Oh! And for the Grand Arena, I suggest you put a 'Go Back' or an 'Next Round' option on your page so that the reader can quickly go back. I know it's stupid since that you can easily just press the back button, but, it makes the story feel more polished. --Heyoeveryone 09:28, 9 November 2011 (UTC)
Thanks everyone for putting forth your comments for my stories! It really inspires me to keep writing. I plan on continuing putting up updates as I can find the time. I also plan on a big session after i've completed a little more on the Crimson Arena of going back and editing everything to make it look nicer, correct spelling and grammer mistakes (which I know are everywhere), and in general make it easier to read. As I work on my writing in this fashion i'll likely be putting out another story, this one not containing adult content.
As a final note, please continue giving me feedback as much as possible! And suggestions would be great as i'd love to improve my work in any way possible.
