Go out to the balcony

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Something's coming your way. You call out who it is. Nothing
Something's coming your way. You call out who it is. Nothing
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Its Closer.... closer.... crrrkkk gkkkk.... its the noise at least u figured out what was making it.
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Its Closer.... getting a lot closer.... the noise started again crrrkkk kshhh.... its the same noise that woke you up and you found who was making it.
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The person pulling you further away from the room door closer towards the balcony edge to going over it with the person dragging you.
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It grabbed you pulling and pushing the sounds now different like gurgling sounds of someone choking.
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The person pulling you further away from the room door closer towards the balcony edge.
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Then going over it with the person who had grabbed you the sounds growing more disturbing. Then finally something hard hits your cheek 'THUD'
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Your eyes wide open as you keep staring from the lawn floor you couldn't move everything was still to dark but the noise started again.
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Your eyes were wide open while a blank stare focused straight ahead at the individual that pulled you down. The thing wasn't moving then finally it pulled itself up an empty gurgling choking scream not so loud like its lungs were filled with water. Then the dragging noises started moving away from your corpse.
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Ghsssk...... Krrrrkkk........Kkkkkkk........  
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You died not knowing what killed you.
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Kshhhhh..... kshhhh.... its feet dragging in the grass away from you.
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I'm sorry but you died not knowing what killed you.

Current revision as of 05:05, 3 November 2009

You go out to the balcony.

It was too dark no moonlight tonight to show you what's in the dark sorry...

Something's coming your way. You call out who it is. Nothing

Its Closer.... getting a lot closer.... the noise started again crrrkkk kshhh.... its the same noise that woke you up and you found who was making it.

It grabbed you pulling and pushing the sounds now different like gurgling sounds of someone choking. The person pulling you further away from the room door closer towards the balcony edge. Then going over it with the person who had grabbed you the sounds growing more disturbing. Then finally something hard hits your cheek 'THUD'

Your eyes were wide open while a blank stare focused straight ahead at the individual that pulled you down. The thing wasn't moving then finally it pulled itself up an empty gurgling choking scream not so loud like its lungs were filled with water. Then the dragging noises started moving away from your corpse.

Kshhhhh..... kshhhh.... its feet dragging in the grass away from you.

I'm sorry but you died not knowing what killed you.









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