Go inside the large mansion

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Moving closer to the mansion you notice that it was full of people in black. Walking into the mansion entrance you see rows of flowers and the scent of strong perfume in the air. Where had your sister gone and where were your parents?
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Moving closer to the mansion you notice that it was full of people in semi to formal clothes. Walking into the mansion entrance you see rows of flowers and the scent of strong perfume in the air. Where had your sister gone and where were your parents? you wondered.
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Pushing through the crowds you see more people in black children and adults you walk past them and into the farthest room decorated in bouquet's.
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Pushing through the crowds you recognize more of your distant relatives you walk past them and into a room decorated in bouquet's.
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Adriane your sister was here with your dad Jason Gregory and your mother Nikki. They all sat in chair in front of the room your family and looks like 3 other families separated by the crowd in the back showing their respect.  
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Adriane your sister was here with your dad Jason and your mother Nikki. They were huddled together with 3 other families who seemed more important than the rest of the guests. In this room a strong odor of perfume and the hospital overpowered everything and dozens of photographs of a man were plastered throughout the room with the words "In Memory of Caleb Gregory"
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Then you suddenly realize there was a huge wooden box in the front blocked from view by the 2 other families standing near it. It was a funeral but who was Caleb Gregory? he had the same last name as yours and you came to a realization it was a.. family funeral. Not a vacation for the break they were gonna spend it in this place to attend a funeral.
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In this room a strong odor of perfume and the hospital overpowered everything and dozens of photographs of a man were plastered throughout the room with the words "In Memory of Caleb Gregory"
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It was a funeral but who was Caleb Gregory?  
[[Walk towards your family]]
[[Walk towards your family]]

Revision as of 19:36, 4 August 2009

Moving closer to the mansion you notice that it was full of people in black. Walking into the mansion entrance you see rows of flowers and the scent of strong perfume in the air. Where had your sister gone and where were your parents?

Pushing through the crowds you see more people in black children and adults you walk past them and into the farthest room decorated in bouquet's.

Adriane your sister was here with your dad Jason Gregory and your mother Nikki. They all sat in chair in front of the room your family and looks like 3 other families separated by the crowd in the back showing their respect.

In this room a strong odor of perfume and the hospital overpowered everything and dozens of photographs of a man were plastered throughout the room with the words "In Memory of Caleb Gregory"

It was a funeral but who was Caleb Gregory?

Walk towards your family

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