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		+	Using the status bar and category is certainly a step in the right direction.  However, when you write sentences as:
		+	'''Penny says with a grin "nice one, but now I need you to clean off this cum, preferably with your tongue.'''
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		+	instead using proper grammar and writing:
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		+	'''Penny says with a grin, "Nice one, but now I need you to clean off this cum, preferably with your tongue."'''
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		+	then your writing goes in the garbage.  Please contribute to someone else's story or start your own.  You can be as grammatically sloppy as you like in your own story.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:20, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

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Using the status bar and category is certainly a step in the right direction. However, when you write sentences as:

Penny says with a grin "nice one, but now I need you to clean off this cum, preferably with your tongue.

instead using proper grammar and writing:

Penny says with a grin, "Nice one, but now I need you to clean off this cum, preferably with your tongue."

then your writing goes in the garbage. Please contribute to someone else's story or start your own. You can be as grammatically sloppy as you like in your own story.--Platypus 21:20, 27 August 2013 (UTC)