Go out for a smoke

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*Go back and [[follow the family discussion]]
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There were good memories in this town with your uncle and your cousins before all this misfortune.
There were good memories in this town with your uncle and your cousins before all this misfortune.
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There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.
There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.
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"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Gazing in the direction she spoke of, it was true they were in full blossom. The breeze picking up making the petals dance in the air bathing Edo in red.
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"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Gazing in the direction she spoke of, the trees were in full blossom.
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It seemed that you piqued her interest knowing your not a local, she poked and prodded questions of the the places you've traveled and the things you've seen. This was her hometown and she had never traveled outside of it.
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Time passed and went you wanted to know more about her, but she insisted she wanted to know more about you.
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Then she had to leave not knowing when the chance to see each other would come again.
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She spoke "My name is Otsuyu" and both bid farewell.  
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"It is they bloomed early this year." Looking back, but no one was there

Revision as of 05:53, 24 February 2012

You light a cigarette and take a walk.

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There were good memories in this town with your uncle and your cousins before all this misfortune.

Stopping at the wooden bridge you stare back at the mansion in the distance. Then dip your head as you look at the clear water below. There were no fish nothing moving in the water and you could clearly see you own reflection.

"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you.

There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.

"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Gazing in the direction she spoke of, the trees were in full blossom.

"It is they bloomed early this year." Looking back, but no one was there


The lights flicker and you go to sleep

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