Go out for a smoke

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You light a cigarette and take a walk.
You light a cigarette and take a walk.
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*Go back and [[follow the family discussion]]
*Go back and [[follow the family discussion]]
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"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you.
"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you.
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There stood a beautiful woman clad in a kimono her pearl white skin and lady like demeanor.
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There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.
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"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Taking a look, it was true the sakura trees had blossomed.
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"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Gazing in the direction she spoke of, it was true they were in full blossom. The breeze picking up making the petals dance in the air bathing Edo in red.
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The streets by the river awash in the beautiful red and pink dyed leaves.
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Few small talk here and there you reveal that you are here for your uncles funeral and you live far away.
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It seemed that you piqued her interest knowing your not a local, she poked and prodded questions of the the places you've traveled and the things you've seen. This was her hometown and she had never traveled outside of it.
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With this she lights up asking you of your hometown and the places you have traveled.
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Before long you lose track of time her presence hypnotic and comforting. Failing to notice another presence with you till she spoke.
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Time passed and went you wanted to know more about her, but she insisted she wanted to know more about you.
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"Mistress we have to go, its time" It was another girl who looked deeply distressed.
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Then she had to leave not knowing when the chance to see each other would come again.
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"I have to go" Becoming deeply concerned that you would never meet her again you ask her name and address.
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She spoke "My name is Otsuyu" and both bid farewell.  
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"My name is Otsuyu and ill meet you here again" They walk away across the bridge.  
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Feeling excited on your next encounter
 
[[The lights flicker and you go to sleep]]
[[The lights flicker and you go to sleep]]

Revision as of 03:13, 24 February 2012

You light a cigarette and take a walk.

edo_streets.jpg

There were good memories in this town with your uncle and your cousins before all this misfortune.

Stopping at the wooden bridge you stare back at the mansion in the distance. Then dip your head as you look at the clear water below. There were no fish nothing moving in the water and you could clearly see you own reflection.

"Beautiful isn't it?" The voice surprised you as you stop gazing at the water below to the person next to you.

There stood a woman pale in skin yet beautiful like ivory, her demeanor and attire showed she was a lady from a well off house.

"The rows of sakura trees blossoming, don't you agree?" she spoke in a more upbeat tone. Gazing in the direction she spoke of, it was true they were in full blossom. The breeze picking up making the petals dance in the air bathing Edo in red.

It seemed that you piqued her interest knowing your not a local, she poked and prodded questions of the the places you've traveled and the things you've seen. This was her hometown and she had never traveled outside of it.

Time passed and went you wanted to know more about her, but she insisted she wanted to know more about you. Then she had to leave not knowing when the chance to see each other would come again.

She spoke "My name is Otsuyu" and both bid farewell.


The lights flicker and you go to sleep

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