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You hear her about to reply with an angry response, but she manages to take control, and move on. | You hear her about to reply with an angry response, but she manages to take control, and move on. | ||
| - | ''"As I was saying,"'' She goes on, ''"We were a couple for seven years, in that time we went through so many moments together. Simply put, the best years of my life. Three months ago, we went to the place | + | ''"As I was saying,"'' She goes on, ''"We were a couple for seven years, in that time we went through so many moments together. Simply put, the best years of my life. Three months ago, we went to the place where we found each other, Newsense park. I couldn't understand why we would ever come back here at the time, the place was literally a dump, rubbish was everywhere, I counted at least three homeless men rummaging through the trashcans. It was disgusting."'' |
Newsense Park. That name rings a bell in your mind, you've definitely been there before, but you just aren't able to grasp it in your mind. | Newsense Park. That name rings a bell in your mind, you've definitely been there before, but you just aren't able to grasp it in your mind. | ||
Current revision as of 00:20, 28 January 2012
"Will everyone just please shut up!" You boom your voice into the walkie talkie, "Let's just get this damn thing over with so I can finally decide. Okay?"
Peace finally enters this little conversation, as they both finally agree.
"Alright, I'll stop." May finally concedes, "Just make sure that he doesn't interrupt my speech."
"I can do whatever I want, May." The voice chimes in, "I did capture you didn't I?"
"Shut up."
"No, you shut up." He sounds like he's enjoying this.
"Will everyone just please be quiet?" You quickly become annoyed, "You're acting like a bunch of kids."
"Yeah, May! Stop acting like such a child!"
You hear her about to reply with an angry response, but she manages to take control, and move on.
"As I was saying," She goes on, "We were a couple for seven years, in that time we went through so many moments together. Simply put, the best years of my life. Three months ago, we went to the place where we found each other, Newsense park. I couldn't understand why we would ever come back here at the time, the place was literally a dump, rubbish was everywhere, I counted at least three homeless men rummaging through the trashcans. It was disgusting."
Newsense Park. That name rings a bell in your mind, you've definitely been there before, but you just aren't able to grasp it in your mind.
"Eventually, we found a 'clean' seat, most of the others were just encased in a shell of trash and junk. In my mind, I really wanted to leave. Then you told me something that would change my life forever. So you know what that would be? If you can't I'll just repeat it in the exact words you said it."
Think, think, think! What was that question? Something suddenly pops up in your mind and you let it flow out of your mouth.
"May." You start off, "Do you remember this place? This was the place where we met. Where I found the girl of my dreams. Till this moment, every night, I go to bed, fall asleep and think about you, yearn for you, wish you were here with me. Then I open my eyes, who do I find laying next to me? You. You, my dearest, was, is, and always will be my dream. So May, will you please, make my dream come true and become my wife?"
"Oh my god!" May rejoices, "You remember! You remember! I can't believe it!"
What did you just say? Can it be that you are starting to remember who you are? Or is this just a one off chance? The voice is also shocked by this revelation.
"So, so, so, you know who I am?"
He's paranoid now, this may be your chance to strike! You can't seem to recall his voice from your disjointed memory, but this could be your only opportunity to really make him scared. If he does catch that you don't know, he may punish you though, so watch out.
